Comments received on poems by raven16rt
You say you love me
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Great job, Raven.
I\'m hopeful this poem is fiction, since my imagination ran wild with something wet on the floor and your red hands.
Suspense poetry is wonderful and I enjoyed yours immensely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:22
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:
Great job, Raven.
I\'m hopeful this poem is fiction, since my imagination ran wild with something wet on the floor and your red hands.
Suspense poetry is wonderful and I enjoyed yours immensely. :)
September 24th, 2018 18:22
You say you love me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAVEN ~Thanks for your first Poem a very poignant & sad. account of \"unrequited love\".Many of us have had similar experiences (although Males generally drown their sorrows in alcohol rather than self~harm). Unrequited Love is hard to bear at first we meet it with disbelief ~ then despair ~ then self~harm & grief etc. I share this site with my FIANCEE ANGELA and we have both had heartaches in the past but our Love is very Secure. There is life after LOVE collapses. Thanks for sharing so openly & frankly trust you found it CATHARTIC. Please check our SITE ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA MPS works by reading & commenting on each on others Poems ~ OK
September 24th, 2018 14:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME RAVEN ~Thanks for your first Poem a very poignant & sad. account of \"unrequited love\".Many of us have had similar experiences (although Males generally drown their sorrows in alcohol rather than self~harm). Unrequited Love is hard to bear at first we meet it with disbelief ~ then despair ~ then self~harm & grief etc. I share this site with my FIANCEE ANGELA and we have both had heartaches in the past but our Love is very Secure. There is life after LOVE collapses. Thanks for sharing so openly & frankly trust you found it CATHARTIC. Please check our SITE ~ Yours BRIAN & ANGELA MPS works by reading & commenting on each on others Poems ~ OK
September 24th, 2018 14:51
