Calling for home
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HELLO EVE ~ WELCOME TO MPS ! Thnaks for your first Poem. Elegantly written & spaced but with a very SAD message. We all need a HOME and even though Im 35 I still go to my MUMS for Sunday Dinner ! If we lose our HOME we always try to find one (TRYING TO FIND MY HOME) It is frustrating (SILENCE DOUBT ANXIETY). The worst thing is REJECTION (VOICES ~ NOT ENOUGH NOT WANTED NEVER FIND HOME !).
I admire your resolve ~ Keep Trying ~ One day stronger than VOICES ~ One day I\'ll be HOME ~ SO I\'LL KEEP CALLING.
The situation (you describe in the Poem) made me SAD ~ Your ending gave me HOPE ! Thanks for sharing. Please check our POEMS. The way MPS works is we read and comment on each others poems ~ OK ! You can also build up a cohort of FRIENDS. Yours BRIAN,

October 8th, 2018 08:08