Comments received on poems by ImpGratAdapt
Impermanence (viii)
dusk arising said:
No changes necessary. Short and sweet, \'less is more\'.
Powerful and punchy and gives your reader plenty of opportunity to romance your words.
October 14th, 2018 07:10
dusk arising said:
No changes necessary. Short and sweet, \'less is more\'.
Powerful and punchy and gives your reader plenty of opportunity to romance your words.
October 14th, 2018 07:10
Untitled
dusk arising said:
All true. But how boring simply to wait.... u may be disappointed. And to rob the mind of speculation.... isn\'t that the other side of madness.
Great provocative writing thank you.
October 12th, 2018 09:24
dusk arising said:
All true. But how boring simply to wait.... u may be disappointed. And to rob the mind of speculation.... isn\'t that the other side of madness.
Great provocative writing thank you.
October 12th, 2018 09:24
Impermanence (II)
sylviasearcher said:
Oh no I genuinely liked it. Short and succinct but so much within 17 words.
A haiku too!
October 11th, 2018 01:25
sylviasearcher said:
Oh no I genuinely liked it. Short and succinct but so much within 17 words.
A haiku too!
October 11th, 2018 01:25
