Comments received on poems by brookelynn
The Dying Light
sylviasearcher said:
I really enjoyed this piece... With words like that inside you can never be a bitter breeze of forgotten things.
October 30th, 2018 09:13
sylviasearcher said:
I really enjoyed this piece... With words like that inside you can never be a bitter breeze of forgotten things.
October 30th, 2018 09:13
The Dying Light
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BROOKE ~ Thank you for your first POEM ~ very elegantly written with an enigmatic message ! I love your analogy of the BITTER BREEZE ! Forgotten things do come back to haunt us. Im 35 so I can empathise. Thanks for caring & sharing !
I have visited California several times it is a Great State to be in ! We all love MEGHAN MARKLE and she is in AUCKLAND NEW ZEALAND today (with HARRY) where my Fiancee Angela is on a work exchange !
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October 30th, 2018 07:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME BROOKE ~ Thank you for your first POEM ~ very elegantly written with an enigmatic message ! I love your analogy of the BITTER BREEZE ! Forgotten things do come back to haunt us. Im 35 so I can empathise. Thanks for caring & sharing !
I have visited California several times it is a Great State to be in ! We all love MEGHAN MARKLE and she is in AUCKLAND NEW ZEALAND today (with HARRY) where my Fiancee Angela is on a work exchange !
MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems & Fusions (You have to click on DEVELOPING to see active fusions !) and you can add MPS FRIENDS ~ Yours BRIAN (England UK) Please check our POEM on NUTS today and also our FUSION on CHRISTMAS ! Thanks B & A !
October 30th, 2018 07:37
