Comments received on poems by Frederick Samson
Misguided
dusk arising said:
A sad tale which seems all to familiar. Why does wisdom take so long to mature? You tell of human nature in youthful desires, and deception, manipulation.
Aye, all too familiar for me.
Outstanding!
May 7th, 2019 17:12
dusk arising said:
A sad tale which seems all to familiar. Why does wisdom take so long to mature? You tell of human nature in youthful desires, and deception, manipulation.
Aye, all too familiar for me.
Outstanding!
May 7th, 2019 17:12
When It’s Time For Me To Sleep
Frederick Samson said:
The format was a lot different but was automatically changed when I pasted it and wouldn’t let me alter it for some unknown reason
April 26th, 2019 09:05
Frederick Samson said:
The format was a lot different but was automatically changed when I pasted it and wouldn’t let me alter it for some unknown reason
April 26th, 2019 09:05
When It’s Time For Me To Sleep
Neville said:
I must say that I found this rather difficult to read/follow but that say\'s more about my visual impairment and the way my brain works than about the way you have structured this post... N
April 26th, 2019 08:51
Neville said:
I must say that I found this rather difficult to read/follow but that say\'s more about my visual impairment and the way my brain works than about the way you have structured this post... N
April 26th, 2019 08:51
When It’s Time For Me To Sleep
Suresh said:
No one knows how many ticks & ticks there are in ones life. The best we can do is to live in the moment, and do the best we know how.
I don\'t know if you meant to write in this format, but positively a very interesting read.
April 25th, 2019 12:07
Suresh said:
No one knows how many ticks & ticks there are in ones life. The best we can do is to live in the moment, and do the best we know how.
I don\'t know if you meant to write in this format, but positively a very interesting read.
April 25th, 2019 12:07
Rope to rope
Goldfinch60 said:
That place is there for all of us all we need to do is see the light in the darkness and it will pull us forward.
Good positive write.
November 30th, 2018 01:57
Goldfinch60 said:
That place is there for all of us all we need to do is see the light in the darkness and it will pull us forward.
Good positive write.
November 30th, 2018 01:57
Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ?
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts that come while sleeping do disturb so much in sleeping but I think that I msut be lucky as although they can wake me I can quickly go back to sleep. It must be hard if they are neer ending.
Good write, welcome to MPS.
November 23rd, 2018 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Those thoughts that come while sleeping do disturb so much in sleeping but I think that I msut be lucky as although they can wake me I can quickly go back to sleep. It must be hard if they are neer ending.
Good write, welcome to MPS.
November 23rd, 2018 02:13
Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ?
Frederick Samson said:
Thanks for your comments, I don’t suffer too much, I’ve had an overactive mind all my life so I am use to it now.
November 22nd, 2018 11:50
Frederick Samson said:
Thanks for your comments, I don’t suffer too much, I’ve had an overactive mind all my life so I am use to it now.
November 22nd, 2018 11:50
Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ?
Fay Slimm. said:
I know full well how chronic insomnia gets us to a screaming point - your words struck home - do hope things get better soon -- I took the notion that I do not need as much time in bed as I thought and getting up and writing or reading for a while in the night seems to work in tiring my brain into sleep for a short time again..Hoping this may help you Frederick.
November 22nd, 2018 11:40
Fay Slimm. said:
I know full well how chronic insomnia gets us to a screaming point - your words struck home - do hope things get better soon -- I took the notion that I do not need as much time in bed as I thought and getting up and writing or reading for a while in the night seems to work in tiring my brain into sleep for a short time again..Hoping this may help you Frederick.
November 22nd, 2018 11:40
Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ?
Neville said:
I am sure many of us here will be able to empathise with you, and these fine words.. tis hard to keep ya chin up & think of England when all you really need is some decent shuteye... good luck.. N
November 22nd, 2018 08:47
Neville said:
I am sure many of us here will be able to empathise with you, and these fine words.. tis hard to keep ya chin up & think of England when all you really need is some decent shuteye... good luck.. N
November 22nd, 2018 08:47
Does it seem as if I’m dreamin’ ?
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and I almost felt it echoing some of my own words. Even the patterning. I’ll check the title of the poem it could almost be the other half to.
Funnily I was thinking less of the act of the physical act of sleep as I read but of the battle between sleeping through life and denial and escaping through dreams.
November 22nd, 2018 08:10
sylviasearcher said:
Thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading and I almost felt it echoing some of my own words. Even the patterning. I’ll check the title of the poem it could almost be the other half to.
Funnily I was thinking less of the act of the physical act of sleep as I read but of the battle between sleeping through life and denial and escaping through dreams.
November 22nd, 2018 08:10
