Comments received on poems by ztaysimple
Two sides to a coin
Cheeky Missy said:
\"... heads I win; tails you lose--\" was a line from a rhyme they taught us way too many years ago. Ergo, I don\'t flip coins since I\'ll lose either way, which is perhaps what they intended me to learn?
Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy, dangling before the reader a haunting carrot. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:51
Cheeky Missy said:
\"... heads I win; tails you lose--\" was a line from a rhyme they taught us way too many years ago. Ergo, I don\'t flip coins since I\'ll lose either way, which is perhaps what they intended me to learn?
Beautifully rendered with a subtle poignancy, dangling before the reader a haunting carrot. Thank you for sharing.
September 22nd, 2024 13:51
Effortless Charm
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - so poetic - a great piece of romantic verse.
March 15th, 2019 12:43
Fay Slimm. said:
Ah - so poetic - a great piece of romantic verse.
March 15th, 2019 12:43
Beautiful Pain
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, this piece shows us that through pain a great strength is acquired and highlights the importance of the experience.
February 4th, 2019 20:12
Caleb.A said:
Very well written, this piece shows us that through pain a great strength is acquired and highlights the importance of the experience.
February 4th, 2019 20:12
