Comments received on poems by Asiakayy
Mental Wars
dusk arising said:
Life is a struggle at times especially when you are young. For advice is not easy to take from older wiser folk, the only way to learn is by hard knocks and experience. As you gain more experience of life\'s diversity you will become wise and realise the crown you wear is a crown of self esteem made from the prescious metal of hard earned knowledge.
Please google to find the writing called \'desiderata\' by Max Ehrman. It is a valid piece, just one page, worth reading time and again to refresh your outlook and give worth to your very existence.
February 11th, 2019 10:49
dusk arising said:
Life is a struggle at times especially when you are young. For advice is not easy to take from older wiser folk, the only way to learn is by hard knocks and experience. As you gain more experience of life\'s diversity you will become wise and realise the crown you wear is a crown of self esteem made from the prescious metal of hard earned knowledge.
Please google to find the writing called \'desiderata\' by Max Ehrman. It is a valid piece, just one page, worth reading time and again to refresh your outlook and give worth to your very existence.
February 11th, 2019 10:49
Lock My Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it shows how untrustworthy some people are, I do hope that he has left your heart, somebody who is true for you will be there for you.
Welcome to MPS.
February 11th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, it shows how untrustworthy some people are, I do hope that he has left your heart, somebody who is true for you will be there for you.
Welcome to MPS.
February 11th, 2019 01:55
Lock My Doors
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME KAYY : ANGELA here. Thanks for your first Poem. It is well written but with a cautionary message. As a female I am always open to advice especially about locking doors ! I find I learn best form my own mistakes as you have. Im 30 and in the past I\'ve had some negative experiences with Men and it does make one cautious. I share this site with BRIAN my Fiance and we hope to be married in 2020 ! Brian is always a Gentleman and we are very Happy : Hope this encourages you ! Please check our site.
Blessings your MPS Friend : ANGELA
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February 10th, 2019 18:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME KAYY : ANGELA here. Thanks for your first Poem. It is well written but with a cautionary message. As a female I am always open to advice especially about locking doors ! I find I learn best form my own mistakes as you have. Im 30 and in the past I\'ve had some negative experiences with Men and it does make one cautious. I share this site with BRIAN my Fiance and we hope to be married in 2020 ! Brian is always a Gentleman and we are very Happy : Hope this encourages you ! Please check our site.
Blessings your MPS Friend : ANGELA
MPS operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems : OK
February 10th, 2019 18:52
