Comments received on poems by favish1



Wonderful wise wrinkly Wifey
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write showing the absolute love you have for your wife.

Welcome to MPS.

February 15th, 2019 02:03

Wonderful wise wrinkly Wifey
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

WELCOME FAVISH ~ Thanks fior your first Poem ~ Wonderful TITLE and a Wonderful VALENTINE to your Wrinkly Wife !
V1. Life getting better
V2. Love growing
V3. Something special ~ AMEN
V4. Acting like a CLOWN ! LOVE does that !
V5. Indispensible ! (It happens !)
V6. We coould write a Book !
V7. Dogs ~ GKids ~ Kissing C\'est la Vie !
V8. Gentleness of Touch ~ essential !
V9. Now you know just HOW MUCH ~ I LOVE YOU !

An elegant Poem in Subject & Structure ! NINE balanced quatrains with a consistent rhyme pattern abab cdcd etc ~ very readable & recitable. Thanks for sharing.
YOURS BRIAN & ANGELA.
Please check our site ~ Thanks B & A


February 14th, 2019 14:53