Comments received on poems by killer._bee
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killer._bee said:
But I like cheese. Ive been having the weirdest dreams about babies. 100% real dream. You are welcome x
March 27th, 2019 05:09
killer._bee said:
But I like cheese. Ive been having the weirdest dreams about babies. 100% real dream. You are welcome x
March 27th, 2019 05:09
It
dusk arising said:
That\'ll teach you not to eat cheese at supper time. You really dreamed that? It will be interesting to return here and see how MPS poets have interpreted your words.
You certainly held me with this piece.
March 27th, 2019 05:06
dusk arising said:
That\'ll teach you not to eat cheese at supper time. You really dreamed that? It will be interesting to return here and see how MPS poets have interpreted your words.
You certainly held me with this piece.
March 27th, 2019 05:06
Clear mind
Goldfinch60 said:
May your clear mind remain with you as you go into the wonders that life has for you.
March 18th, 2019 01:55
Goldfinch60 said:
May your clear mind remain with you as you go into the wonders that life has for you.
March 18th, 2019 01:55
Without you
Nicholas Browning said:
The classic battle between the heart and the brain.
Best regards.
March 17th, 2019 02:46
Nicholas Browning said:
The classic battle between the heart and the brain.
Best regards.
March 17th, 2019 02:46
If only you knew
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve no need to hide it,
For I decree to let it be known!
The one thing in this world
I can\'t stand, is a hoe.
March 16th, 2019 01:26
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'ve no need to hide it,
For I decree to let it be known!
The one thing in this world
I can\'t stand, is a hoe.
March 16th, 2019 01:26
Take me
dusk arising said:
LOL Looks like you are already taken! A delightful steamy hot passion poem.
I think i need a cold shower now.
March 6th, 2019 06:57
dusk arising said:
LOL Looks like you are already taken! A delightful steamy hot passion poem.
I think i need a cold shower now.
March 6th, 2019 06:57
Dreaming sucks
elmina said:
i feel this poem not gonna lie. it\'s so hard to feel so passionate for someone and only being able to fantasize a future and doing activities together. great poem, keep em coming!
March 5th, 2019 23:35
elmina said:
i feel this poem not gonna lie. it\'s so hard to feel so passionate for someone and only being able to fantasize a future and doing activities together. great poem, keep em coming!
March 5th, 2019 23:35
Moving on
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD DAY KB (interesting name !) Welcome to MPS : Thanks for your first poem ! Excellent shape & meter. However a very sad subject. Im 30 and have had to move on several times so I can empathise ! Men can be a pain but I share this site with Brian (35) my Fiancee ! We are very compatible and plan to marry @ Easter 2020. I trust you are moving from an unsuitable relationship (as in the poem) into a compatible & loving one ! Brian & I both live in the South of the UK but I am on a Work Exchange in New Zealand until October 2019. I am a Physiotherapist and Brian is a Lecturer in Applied Science we have a lot in common. Please check our site :
Blessings ANGELA & BRIAN.
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Love the visual very emotive !
March 4th, 2019 15:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD DAY KB (interesting name !) Welcome to MPS : Thanks for your first poem ! Excellent shape & meter. However a very sad subject. Im 30 and have had to move on several times so I can empathise ! Men can be a pain but I share this site with Brian (35) my Fiancee ! We are very compatible and plan to marry @ Easter 2020. I trust you are moving from an unsuitable relationship (as in the poem) into a compatible & loving one ! Brian & I both live in the South of the UK but I am on a Work Exchange in New Zealand until October 2019. I am a Physiotherapist and Brian is a Lecturer in Applied Science we have a lot in common. Please check our site :
Blessings ANGELA & BRIAN.
MPS works by reading and (if you wish) commenting on each others POEMS : OK
Love the visual very emotive !
March 4th, 2019 15:51
