Comments received on poems by NilavroNill



Death Of Joy
2781 said:

I will put my law in their inward parts, and write it in their hearts;

March 21st, 2023 03:06

Death Of Joy
David Wakeling said:

This is okay.I have no idea what it is about because nothing is explained but hey what would I know

March 21st, 2023 02:11

Waiting For The Last Ritual
sophin said:

\"The room was empty with the silence

Of the graveyard, except for the legacy of my

Ancestral breath. Bit by bit.

Again, and again.\"

Beautifully haunting words, dear poet. The words are so potent, and conjure images of smoke that I have only seen in the dark. Well written.

January 27th, 2023 11:56

Waiting For The Last Ritual
L. B. Mek said:

devoid of context, my appreciation is stunted
but still, I am naturally drawn to your wonderful lines
thanks for sharing

January 27th, 2023 07:07

The Deep Secret
NilavroNill said:

Thanks a lot.

January 27th, 2023 04:12

The Deep Secret
Neville said:


Another impressive poetic post ..
I sincerely hope that others will now feel able to peruse it as deeply and as intently, as indeed, I have done ..

January 26th, 2023 04:00

Alone With My Loneliness
Neville said:


I thoroughly enjoyed this introduction to your ink sir and am glad I stumbled upon them by accident ..

January 26th, 2023 03:56

The Journey
Seek said:

\"... wherever I look, I see only the smile of the innocents\".

It is those smiles that have saved humanity from itself. A great line that encapsulates the essence of your writing. Thanks for sharing.

October 15th, 2021 08:04

After The Holocaust
Goldfinch60 said:

It may happen one day.

February 7th, 2020 02:26

After The Fifteenth Step…
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Painful are the smallest memories
Great write

May 18th, 2019 06:50

Alone With My Loneliness
Nicholas Browning said:

This is quite a nice read. Well done.

March 24th, 2019 19:53