Comments received on poems by All In
Measurements
L. B. Mek said:
for feelings that are reciprocated, however sluggishly
these words, read so emphatically romantic!
but if our attentions are not welcome
then this is can be a scary thing to read,
@ a fine line, between love & hate
(wonderfully succinct! thanks for sharing)
July 28th, 2022 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
for feelings that are reciprocated, however sluggishly
these words, read so emphatically romantic!
but if our attentions are not welcome
then this is can be a scary thing to read,
@ a fine line, between love & hate
(wonderfully succinct! thanks for sharing)
July 28th, 2022 03:24
Fine Print
L. B. Mek said:
I hate that flip-flop
spineless term:
\'what I meant to say\'..
because it\'s grounded
on modernity\'s need for reactionary
dialogue
devoid of thought, words are vomited
quickly, loudly with impotent fury
with the goal being to argue
and nothing else..
then when they realise they can\'t
worm their way out
begins, the whole back stepping
explaining..
it\'s all so petty and boring...
(such a relatable read
thanks for sharing)
July 28th, 2022 02:37
L. B. Mek said:
I hate that flip-flop
spineless term:
\'what I meant to say\'..
because it\'s grounded
on modernity\'s need for reactionary
dialogue
devoid of thought, words are vomited
quickly, loudly with impotent fury
with the goal being to argue
and nothing else..
then when they realise they can\'t
worm their way out
begins, the whole back stepping
explaining..
it\'s all so petty and boring...
(such a relatable read
thanks for sharing)
July 28th, 2022 02:37
Untitled
L. B. Mek said:
how about, taking a big bite
boldly, begin
by titling your feelings
and seeing if intimate foreplay
can yield, a relationship
worthy
of such eloquent
Poetry..
thanks for sharing, a lovely read
July 26th, 2022 02:32
L. B. Mek said:
how about, taking a big bite
boldly, begin
by titling your feelings
and seeing if intimate foreplay
can yield, a relationship
worthy
of such eloquent
Poetry..
thanks for sharing, a lovely read
July 26th, 2022 02:32
Herlinda, pt. 4
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful simplicity of honesty..
thanks for sharing
June 18th, 2021 03:20
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful simplicity of honesty..
thanks for sharing
June 18th, 2021 03:20
Herlinda, pt. 1
L. B. Mek said:
interesting, I look forward to the story unfolding
thanks for sharing
June 11th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
interesting, I look forward to the story unfolding
thanks for sharing
June 11th, 2021 04:15
(Untitled)
L. B. Mek said:
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach
while unflinchingly revealing passion\'s naturally - lingering, effects
tastefully worded..
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
a good read, utilising elements of a playful, light-hearted approach
while unflinchingly revealing passion\'s naturally - lingering, effects
tastefully worded..
thanks for sharing
May 6th, 2021 03:44
Trauma
Goldfinch60 said:
That lightness will be with you and all will be well.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:15
Goldfinch60 said:
That lightness will be with you and all will be well.
Andy
May 5th, 2021 15:15
(Untitled)
Goldfinch60 said:
May you and that love linger forever.
Welcome to MPS.
May 5th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
May you and that love linger forever.
Welcome to MPS.
May 5th, 2021 00:44
