Comments received on poems by StephD
The Zoo
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those dark places in our lives but the light is never missing it is always. there for us all.
May 20th, 2019 00:32
Goldfinch60 said:
We all have those dark places in our lives but the light is never missing it is always. there for us all.
May 20th, 2019 00:32
The Zoo
MendedFences27 said:
Even in the darkest of dark moments there is a light, not external, but internal. One who can imagine, can always survive. Real Magic, not the work of charlatans, is a product of the human mind. Art, creativity, making something from nothing save words, paint, stone, whatever, is magic. Keep writing as you have here and magic will happen. Loved your poem. Phil A.
May 19th, 2019 16:48
MendedFences27 said:
Even in the darkest of dark moments there is a light, not external, but internal. One who can imagine, can always survive. Real Magic, not the work of charlatans, is a product of the human mind. Art, creativity, making something from nothing save words, paint, stone, whatever, is magic. Keep writing as you have here and magic will happen. Loved your poem. Phil A.
May 19th, 2019 16:48
The Zoo
SoulMeetsBody said:
We all have our inner turmoil, even those who seem to have it all together. Great poem.
May 19th, 2019 14:00
SoulMeetsBody said:
We all have our inner turmoil, even those who seem to have it all together. Great poem.
May 19th, 2019 14:00
Ink Splattered Skies
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Steph. Walking with nature is wonderful and nature\'s symphony can pull you out of the dark into the light, listen to that blackbird song so full of beauty and wonder.
Welcome to MPS.
May 19th, 2019 01:02
Goldfinch60 said:
Such a good write Steph. Walking with nature is wonderful and nature\'s symphony can pull you out of the dark into the light, listen to that blackbird song so full of beauty and wonder.
Welcome to MPS.
May 19th, 2019 01:02
Ink Splattered Skies
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BLACK IS BLACK : I WANT MY LOVER BACK
WELCOME STEPH : ANGELA (31) here : I share this site with BRIAN (My Fiancee ~ 35) and I love the melancholy Picture and Goth Piano : both haunting. Your poem is well presented in Structure & Subject but the substance of your Message is so so sad for ONE so YOUNG ! Youre only half way through your life (Im only 1/3rd through Mine !) I have experienced Pain like you describe (til I met Brian a couple of years ago !) failed & failing relationships can be a big strain and are quite depressing : I am OK now ! Your wiil find MPS a very empathetic site: hope you get some positive replys ! The site works by reading & commenting on other peoples Poetry & Prose : you can also build up a Circle of Responsive Friends ~ OK
Blessings & Peace : thinking of YOU
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our SITE ~ BRIAN is in UK
Im in NEW ZEALAND on a WORK EXCHANGE til OCTOBER !
May 18th, 2019 15:18
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BLACK IS BLACK : I WANT MY LOVER BACK
WELCOME STEPH : ANGELA (31) here : I share this site with BRIAN (My Fiancee ~ 35) and I love the melancholy Picture and Goth Piano : both haunting. Your poem is well presented in Structure & Subject but the substance of your Message is so so sad for ONE so YOUNG ! Youre only half way through your life (Im only 1/3rd through Mine !) I have experienced Pain like you describe (til I met Brian a couple of years ago !) failed & failing relationships can be a big strain and are quite depressing : I am OK now ! Your wiil find MPS a very empathetic site: hope you get some positive replys ! The site works by reading & commenting on other peoples Poetry & Prose : you can also build up a Circle of Responsive Friends ~ OK
Blessings & Peace : thinking of YOU
Yours ANGELA 🧡
Please check our SITE ~ BRIAN is in UK
Im in NEW ZEALAND on a WORK EXCHANGE til OCTOBER !
May 18th, 2019 15:18
