Castaway
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HA CATALYST : ANGELA HERE : Thanks for your First Poem and Comment - which is a Poem in itself ! Floating in the Sea does give one a 360 perspective on life & love !
I love the structure of your Poem. NINE well separated lines - each replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and each with a MESSAGE which flow into each other !
In my experience my Feelings are never static but fluid - and I never want to be (unwillingly) tied down ! I want to be FREE ! Floating in the sea we can choose the best horizon - and consequently make the best choices ! There is ALWAYS a CLOUD (c\'est la vie ) BUT (as you say in your final line !)) there is ALWAYS a SILVER LINING - That is my experience too !
Thanks for sharing - your will find MPS a very interactive site. We read & comment on each other POEMS ~ OK.

I hope I grasped the meaning of your Poem - more please
I share this site with BRIAN my Fiancee :
Please check our Poems - Thanks ANGELA 🧡🧡

July 16th, 2019 14:29