Comments received on poems by AiR - Atman in Ravi
I am a Soul, Soul is SIP, I am SIP, SIP is in all
2781 said:
A little leaven leavens the whole lump.
June 14th, 2023 07:17
2781 said:
A little leaven leavens the whole lump.
June 14th, 2023 07:17
The A to Z of Death
arobot said:
but, still...not to take it, will not take it lying down
December 15th, 2022 09:12
arobot said:
but, still...not to take it, will not take it lying down
December 15th, 2022 09:12
Don’t cut a cake! Awake! Your Birthday is Fake!
shaa said:
Falling in love with this
September 16th, 2022 10:29
shaa said:
Falling in love with this
September 16th, 2022 10:29
God is Not God, God is SIP — Supreme Immortal Power
Crowns4Christ said:
There is where you have it wrong friend, God does exist,if he didn\'t then neither would we or this beautiful world,of course Satan has control over the world,but not God\'s children,evil will fall,and be gone forever, I a do many, sadly not as much that should, have faith in God and heaven and yes,I also believe in Satan and he\'ll, God is the Only True God, the beginning and end,
March 4th, 2022 10:54
Crowns4Christ said:
There is where you have it wrong friend, God does exist,if he didn\'t then neither would we or this beautiful world,of course Satan has control over the world,but not God\'s children,evil will fall,and be gone forever, I a do many, sadly not as much that should, have faith in God and heaven and yes,I also believe in Satan and he\'ll, God is the Only True God, the beginning and end,
March 4th, 2022 10:54
Life is Karma
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Ravi !! That was very spiritual and also speaks about your maturity about karma..!!
Great Write and really impressed with your understanding of Karma...!!
Thank You !!
December 9th, 2021 11:46
Vamsi Sudha said:
Dear Ravi !! That was very spiritual and also speaks about your maturity about karma..!!
Great Write and really impressed with your understanding of Karma...!!
Thank You !!
December 9th, 2021 11:46
Life is Karma
woundedheart said:
Live a honest productive life honour ones friends and family and know through love and Faith our actions are noted and our reward awaits us at the end of our journey. Thought provoking piece
December 9th, 2021 10:58
woundedheart said:
Live a honest productive life honour ones friends and family and know through love and Faith our actions are noted and our reward awaits us at the end of our journey. Thought provoking piece
December 9th, 2021 10:58
How to Live a Spiritual Life in a Material world?
Paul Bell said:
I think this is why they take children out to the country to see the real world. Not enough simplicity out there.
November 5th, 2021 12:46
Paul Bell said:
I think this is why they take children out to the country to see the real world. Not enough simplicity out there.
November 5th, 2021 12:46
How to Live a Spiritual Life in a Material world?
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s like Im reading something written by my teenage self. Brilliant
November 5th, 2021 11:35
Saxon Crow said:
It\'s like Im reading something written by my teenage self. Brilliant
November 5th, 2021 11:35
Live Life Moment by Moment
L. B. Mek said:
\'There is only one way to live,\'???
who knows, but it\'s kinda crazy
when We assume, because it works for Us
it Has, to work for Everyone else: the Same..
Makes you wonder, if that\'s the case
why are We all, so Fallibly diverse and Wondrously: Unique...
(thanks for sharing)
September 28th, 2021 03:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'There is only one way to live,\'???
who knows, but it\'s kinda crazy
when We assume, because it works for Us
it Has, to work for Everyone else: the Same..
Makes you wonder, if that\'s the case
why are We all, so Fallibly diverse and Wondrously: Unique...
(thanks for sharing)
September 28th, 2021 03:28
MANY PROBLEMS... ONE SOLUTION
orchidee said:
How would those in poor countries see \'Poverty is a state of mind\'? They are experiencing real hardship, poverty, etc.
June 19th, 2021 11:22
orchidee said:
How would those in poor countries see \'Poverty is a state of mind\'? They are experiencing real hardship, poverty, etc.
June 19th, 2021 11:22
A Simple SOLUTION for WORLD PEACE!
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve tried very hard not to comment on this poetic effort.,....and failed.
So if you believe that \'There is a simple solution for World Peace\' and that this solution would be that \'we\' should forsake greed, accept truth, accept the Lord Devine, you are living in cloud cuckoo land.
Beyond that (apart from it\'s length) I admired the poetic form, which you adhered to throughout.
May 21st, 2021 04:51
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'ve tried very hard not to comment on this poetic effort.,....and failed.
So if you believe that \'There is a simple solution for World Peace\' and that this solution would be that \'we\' should forsake greed, accept truth, accept the Lord Devine, you are living in cloud cuckoo land.
Beyond that (apart from it\'s length) I admired the poetic form, which you adhered to throughout.
May 21st, 2021 04:51
A Simple SOLUTION for WORLD PEACE!
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right - \"Make love, not war\".
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:17
Goldfinch60 said:
The Hippies had it right - \"Make love, not war\".
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:17
A Simple SOLUTION for WORLD PEACE!
PrEm Ji said:
Let your prayers be fulfilled...
May 20th, 2021 02:45
PrEm Ji said:
Let your prayers be fulfilled...
May 20th, 2021 02:45
The Law of Attraction
L. B. Mek said:
\'So, don’t believe just the Law of Attraction
It is the Law of Action that will work
What you attract, may never come to you
If from Action, you will shirk\'
an important and useful message in this stanza..
there is that thin line, between
wanting to help and instil what you believe are scaffolding truth\'s into peoples lives,
and declaring theory\'s and belief\'s : as quantifiable law\'s..
I genuinely think your message is helpful, just your tone may scare people away, if Buddhism is your answer that\'s great, so few of us find what we\'re looking for in life, but please - do remember the humility within your chosen dogma, it makes it easier for other\'s to relate to you if you don\'t scare them away with a stance of unquestionable vehemence..
(forgive me if you find my words offensive or my tone unlikeable, I mean no disrespect, truly
I\'m just trying to engage with you as best as my limited self - can, all the best dear poet)
thanks for sharing
February 19th, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
\'So, don’t believe just the Law of Attraction
It is the Law of Action that will work
What you attract, may never come to you
If from Action, you will shirk\'
an important and useful message in this stanza..
there is that thin line, between
wanting to help and instil what you believe are scaffolding truth\'s into peoples lives,
and declaring theory\'s and belief\'s : as quantifiable law\'s..
I genuinely think your message is helpful, just your tone may scare people away, if Buddhism is your answer that\'s great, so few of us find what we\'re looking for in life, but please - do remember the humility within your chosen dogma, it makes it easier for other\'s to relate to you if you don\'t scare them away with a stance of unquestionable vehemence..
(forgive me if you find my words offensive or my tone unlikeable, I mean no disrespect, truly
I\'m just trying to engage with you as best as my limited self - can, all the best dear poet)
thanks for sharing
February 19th, 2021 05:11
PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with d a, there is so much simplicity in peace.
Peace is there for us all
All we need to do is look for it
Then we can go ahead in our lives
With joy and wonder.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
I agree with d a, there is so much simplicity in peace.
Peace is there for us all
All we need to do is look for it
Then we can go ahead in our lives
With joy and wonder.
Andy
November 8th, 2020 01:37
PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK
Doggerel Dave said:
Wow! you stuck your head up above the parapet there, DA. But well said - could apply equally to several other budding B\'s on MPS, so it might be possible to argue that he\'s in \'good \' company!!
November 7th, 2020 19:20
Doggerel Dave said:
Wow! you stuck your head up above the parapet there, DA. But well said - could apply equally to several other budding B\'s on MPS, so it might be possible to argue that he\'s in \'good \' company!!
November 7th, 2020 19:20
PEACE...WHEN THE MONKEY BECOMES A MONK
dusk arising said:
Happiness is peace of mind.
Does not need so many words and verses as you have presented here.
There is beauty in simlplicity. Peace is simplicity.
Your profile shows you have not read any poems posted by others on here. Why do you join a poetry site and not read others output. Do you consider others output unworthy of your interest?
November 7th, 2020 07:57
dusk arising said:
Happiness is peace of mind.
Does not need so many words and verses as you have presented here.
There is beauty in simlplicity. Peace is simplicity.
Your profile shows you have not read any poems posted by others on here. Why do you join a poetry site and not read others output. Do you consider others output unworthy of your interest?
November 7th, 2020 07:57
The Ladder to Heaven
Crowns4Christ said:
great read,you speak the truth,we all must climb this ladder to get to our lord and savior.read the poetry from foreverjesus6 he also made that lifechanging climb.
September 3rd, 2020 13:27
Crowns4Christ said:
great read,you speak the truth,we all must climb this ladder to get to our lord and savior.read the poetry from foreverjesus6 he also made that lifechanging climb.
September 3rd, 2020 13:27
The Ladder to Heaven
dusk arising said:
Don\'t get lost in an old book that was written when everyone believed the world was flat.
When are you going to start reading the poetry posted on this site? Your profile page shows you have never once read anyones poetry on here since you joined.
September 3rd, 2020 12:44
dusk arising said:
Don\'t get lost in an old book that was written when everyone believed the world was flat.
When are you going to start reading the poetry posted on this site? Your profile page shows you have never once read anyones poetry on here since you joined.
September 3rd, 2020 12:44
But we Pray
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING *ARIA* Thanks for sharing this elegant Epic Poem in rhymimg couplets. It is the best Poem on Prayer I have seen on MPS in several Years ! Angela (my Wife) and I are both Committed Christians and we pray each day - Morn - Noon - Night. To share our lives with GOD. As you say there are many ways to Pray and we worship the same God as the Jews. Jahweh = God the Father Prayer is very important in our lives - Individually & Collectively. We can pray anytime & anywhere to share our Joys and our Fears with GOD. We know from experience that Our God both hears and answers our Prayers - AMEN ! Please check our site THANKS !
Love - Peace - Joy
Yours Brian & Angela !
July 2nd, 2020 14:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING *ARIA* Thanks for sharing this elegant Epic Poem in rhymimg couplets. It is the best Poem on Prayer I have seen on MPS in several Years ! Angela (my Wife) and I are both Committed Christians and we pray each day - Morn - Noon - Night. To share our lives with GOD. As you say there are many ways to Pray and we worship the same God as the Jews. Jahweh = God the Father Prayer is very important in our lives - Individually & Collectively. We can pray anytime & anywhere to share our Joys and our Fears with GOD. We know from experience that Our God both hears and answers our Prayers - AMEN ! Please check our site THANKS !
Love - Peace - Joy
Yours Brian & Angela !
July 2nd, 2020 14:07
But we Pray
dusk arising said:
Whereas i detatch from words like lord and god i only do so to detatch from the brainwashed followers of one or other of the man made diversions of the one truth. Indeed the fact that there can only be ONE truth yet the organised religions cannot agree upon it is in itself proof that religion as we know it today is a man made falshood.
I enjoyed your post today and embrace your thoughts which echo my own on this inspiring subject.
July 2nd, 2020 05:37
dusk arising said:
Whereas i detatch from words like lord and god i only do so to detatch from the brainwashed followers of one or other of the man made diversions of the one truth. Indeed the fact that there can only be ONE truth yet the organised religions cannot agree upon it is in itself proof that religion as we know it today is a man made falshood.
I enjoyed your post today and embrace your thoughts which echo my own on this inspiring subject.
July 2nd, 2020 05:37
But we Pray
FineB said:
Hi Atmanin Ravi ,
A great write and very thought provoking on prayer and its impact on our lives.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 2nd, 2020 05:36
FineB said:
Hi Atmanin Ravi ,
A great write and very thought provoking on prayer and its impact on our lives.
Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB
July 2nd, 2020 05:36
True Love is Bliss Not Just a Kiss
dusk arising said:
You could say it all in four lines. Why don\'t you?
September 25th, 2019 01:05
dusk arising said:
You could say it all in four lines. Why don\'t you?
September 25th, 2019 01:05
