Comments received on poems by Moozpace



Tears
benevolentbluebabe said:

Perfectly lovely representation of love\'s allure : ) may your moment endure forever

July 29th, 2020 16:00

Tears
Goldfinch60 said:

May that dream become reality and last a lifetime.

Andy

July 29th, 2020 00:25

\"Free\"
dusk arising said:

A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though i\'m sure it wasn\'t meant here in the possessive way which has led to so much distress in relationships.
As was spoken by a wise person many moons ago \"if you love someone, set them free\".

July 3rd, 2020 23:48

Stars
Goldfinch60 said:

That love will show her the way to you.

June 2nd, 2020 00:59

Night time
Goldfinch60 said:

With words like these that love will soon be with you.

Andy

May 12th, 2020 02:26

Wish
myself and me said:

May your wish come true.

May 9th, 2020 12:26

Wish
snehith pradeep said:

beautifully written :)


May 9th, 2020 03:20

\"Friends\"
dusk arising said:

Friendship is based upon two people enjoying one anothers company and a mutual interest. Jealousy on the other hand....... is something best put away. It has no positives.

May 8th, 2020 01:09

Lilac Sea
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening MOOZ ~ I trust you are aware that when down loaded your elegant ODE is printed in Greek ! Fortunately I studied Classics @ School (20 years ago !) so I was able to transliterate your enigmatic ODE !

The tide is pulling you into the SEA and you are accosted
by a Lilac Fish ! You are pulled screaming (Im not surprized !)
into the water ! BUT (pardoxically) you are drowing sans water !
You faint and a figure (human ?) swims in front of you ~ smiles
and then snogs you ! YOU WILL BE MINE NEXT TIME !

Love the last line ~ More Poems Please ~ preferably in English !
MPS is a PROACTIVE site and works by reading & commenting
on each others Poems ! Please visit our site. Angela is my Fiancee.

Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !

February 23rd, 2020 19:24