Comments received on poems by Moozpace
Tears
benevolentbluebabe said:
Perfectly lovely representation of love\'s allure : ) may your moment endure forever
July 29th, 2020 16:00
benevolentbluebabe said:
Perfectly lovely representation of love\'s allure : ) may your moment endure forever
July 29th, 2020 16:00
Tears
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality and last a lifetime.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality and last a lifetime.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 00:25
\"Free\"
dusk arising said:
A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though i\'m sure it wasn\'t meant here in the possessive way which has led to so much distress in relationships.
As was spoken by a wise person many moons ago \"if you love someone, set them free\".
July 3rd, 2020 23:48
dusk arising said:
A nice love poem it is too. But i cringed at the word \'belong\' though i\'m sure it wasn\'t meant here in the possessive way which has led to so much distress in relationships.
As was spoken by a wise person many moons ago \"if you love someone, set them free\".
July 3rd, 2020 23:48
Night time
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these that love will soon be with you.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these that love will soon be with you.
Andy
May 12th, 2020 02:26
\"Friends\"
dusk arising said:
Friendship is based upon two people enjoying one anothers company and a mutual interest. Jealousy on the other hand....... is something best put away. It has no positives.
May 8th, 2020 01:09
dusk arising said:
Friendship is based upon two people enjoying one anothers company and a mutual interest. Jealousy on the other hand....... is something best put away. It has no positives.
May 8th, 2020 01:09
Lilac Sea
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening MOOZ ~ I trust you are aware that when down loaded your elegant ODE is printed in Greek ! Fortunately I studied Classics @ School (20 years ago !) so I was able to transliterate your enigmatic ODE !
The tide is pulling you into the SEA and you are accosted
by a Lilac Fish ! You are pulled screaming (Im not surprized !)
into the water ! BUT (pardoxically) you are drowing sans water !
You faint and a figure (human ?) swims in front of you ~ smiles
and then snogs you ! YOU WILL BE MINE NEXT TIME !
Love the last line ~ More Poems Please ~ preferably in English !
MPS is a PROACTIVE site and works by reading & commenting
on each others Poems ! Please visit our site. Angela is my Fiancee.
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
February 23rd, 2020 19:24
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Evening MOOZ ~ I trust you are aware that when down loaded your elegant ODE is printed in Greek ! Fortunately I studied Classics @ School (20 years ago !) so I was able to transliterate your enigmatic ODE !
The tide is pulling you into the SEA and you are accosted
by a Lilac Fish ! You are pulled screaming (Im not surprized !)
into the water ! BUT (pardoxically) you are drowing sans water !
You faint and a figure (human ?) swims in front of you ~ smiles
and then snogs you ! YOU WILL BE MINE NEXT TIME !
Love the last line ~ More Poems Please ~ preferably in English !
MPS is a PROACTIVE site and works by reading & commenting
on each others Poems ! Please visit our site. Angela is my Fiancee.
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA !
February 23rd, 2020 19:24