Comments received on poems by Alan .S. Jeeves
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
Goldfinch60 said:
At least they melted together and became one.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
At least they melted together and became one.
Andy
May 11th, 2021 00:01
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
myself and me said:
Sad yet lovely, at the end, they became one.
May 10th, 2021 21:15
myself and me said:
Sad yet lovely, at the end, they became one.
May 10th, 2021 21:15
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha -- that cheered me up. I could not feel sad even though the melted.
May 10th, 2021 12:01
Trenz Pruca said:
Haha -- that cheered me up. I could not feel sad even though the melted.
May 10th, 2021 12:01
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
Doggerel Dave said:
Now if I can stop sobbing Alan, I would be asking myself if this won’t be the fate of many human folks in the next fifteen to twenty or so years …
Neat verse – I admired it very much – thanks.
May 10th, 2021 04:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Now if I can stop sobbing Alan, I would be asking myself if this won’t be the fate of many human folks in the next fifteen to twenty or so years …
Neat verse – I admired it very much – thanks.
May 10th, 2021 04:57
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - - am smiling yet feeling sad tears - - -
what an end to a sweet affair......... love it to bits Alan.
May 10th, 2021 04:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Oooh - - am smiling yet feeling sad tears - - -
what an end to a sweet affair......... love it to bits Alan.
May 10th, 2021 04:47
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
orchidee said:
Good write Alan. Aww!
I tortured my chocolate soldier. Dunked him in hot tea. I\'m horrible! lol.
May 10th, 2021 04:14
orchidee said:
Good write Alan. Aww!
I tortured my chocolate soldier. Dunked him in hot tea. I\'m horrible! lol.
May 10th, 2021 04:14
The March of the Chocolate Soldier
dusk arising said:
Excellent! A must to recite to the grandchildren.
May 10th, 2021 04:13
dusk arising said:
Excellent! A must to recite to the grandchildren.
May 10th, 2021 04:13
The Wild Wind Of Antiquity
Goldfinch60 said:
That wind can bring us knowledge and experience to bring us to the place we are today.
Andy
April 23rd, 2021 00:22
Goldfinch60 said:
That wind can bring us knowledge and experience to bring us to the place we are today.
Andy
April 23rd, 2021 00:22
The Wild Wind Of Antiquity
dusk arising said:
And we who survive the ill wind shall know more than we thought. We were tested and stood our ground.
April 22nd, 2021 16:59
dusk arising said:
And we who survive the ill wind shall know more than we thought. We were tested and stood our ground.
April 22nd, 2021 16:59
Plaisir d\' Amour
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Alan, that love will be forever within you.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Alan, that love will be forever within you.
Andy
April 11th, 2021 00:34
A Lonely Cottage On The Moor
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful poem Alan, my wife and I used to love the Dales and were up there very frequently, you have taken me back there with your words.
This will go into my favourites, thank you.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
What a beautiful poem Alan, my wife and I used to love the Dales and were up there very frequently, you have taken me back there with your words.
This will go into my favourites, thank you.
Andy
March 13th, 2021 01:14
A Lonely Cottage On The Moor
Doggerel Dave said:
A window like that can mean more to you than a great work of art. Nor can the best and most sophisticated electronic medium emulate the experience. That window is greater than just a window - it is part of your life…I’ve had that familiar sense of ownership once.
Enjoyed that reminder, Alan
March 12th, 2021 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
A window like that can mean more to you than a great work of art. Nor can the best and most sophisticated electronic medium emulate the experience. That window is greater than just a window - it is part of your life…I’ve had that familiar sense of ownership once.
Enjoyed that reminder, Alan
March 12th, 2021 17:33
A Winter Morn
Caring dove said:
Lovely words ! Flowed so nicely !
I enjoyed reading 🙂
March 12th, 2021 13:16
Caring dove said:
Lovely words ! Flowed so nicely !
I enjoyed reading 🙂
March 12th, 2021 13:16
A Lonely Cottage On The Moor
Fay Slimm. said:
A penned picture of beauty that only the moors can bequest to those fortunes who live in a lonely but snug cottage - thank you so muh Alan for sharing the feel of its seasonal allure.
March 12th, 2021 11:27
Fay Slimm. said:
A penned picture of beauty that only the moors can bequest to those fortunes who live in a lonely but snug cottage - thank you so muh Alan for sharing the feel of its seasonal allure.
March 12th, 2021 11:27
The Mourning After The Morning After
L. B. Mek said:
that armchair psychoanalyst within me, wants to tap into Freud\'s go-to Oedipus fishing hooks and delve into your choice symbolism of \'hill\' and \'golden torso\' phrasing, or how you smell your way through your reminiscing\'s musing, but I wont..
I will just thank you for sharing a wonderfully engaging read, dear Poet
\'Liberi et Rithimus\' is my idea of free verse - with a purpose, a great concept
February 11th, 2021 04:15
L. B. Mek said:
that armchair psychoanalyst within me, wants to tap into Freud\'s go-to Oedipus fishing hooks and delve into your choice symbolism of \'hill\' and \'golden torso\' phrasing, or how you smell your way through your reminiscing\'s musing, but I wont..
I will just thank you for sharing a wonderfully engaging read, dear Poet
\'Liberi et Rithimus\' is my idea of free verse - with a purpose, a great concept
February 11th, 2021 04:15
The Mourning After The Morning After
Goldfinch60 said:
Yep I can relate to this Alan but it was a very, very long time ago.
Andy
February 10th, 2021 01:17
Goldfinch60 said:
Yep I can relate to this Alan but it was a very, very long time ago.
Andy
February 10th, 2021 01:17
The Mourning After The Morning After
AlitaOpal said:
Oh what a night?!? Could only be a great one and waking up to a nice fresh brew of Arabica coffee.. perfect 🎈
February 9th, 2021 19:56
AlitaOpal said:
Oh what a night?!? Could only be a great one and waking up to a nice fresh brew of Arabica coffee.. perfect 🎈
February 9th, 2021 19:56
The Mourning After The Morning After
Doggerel Dave said:
Well..yeh.....Well..yeh - no I just said that didn\'t I? Oh where\'s the Alka Seltzer? Ah! Foul!
Could really identify with most of the images you present here, Alan. Good stuff.
Some very long time ago now though. Treat alcohol with much more respect - no merit in that; the old bod wouldn\'t take it anymore.
February 9th, 2021 17:41
Doggerel Dave said:
Well..yeh.....Well..yeh - no I just said that didn\'t I? Oh where\'s the Alka Seltzer? Ah! Foul!
Could really identify with most of the images you present here, Alan. Good stuff.
Some very long time ago now though. Treat alcohol with much more respect - no merit in that; the old bod wouldn\'t take it anymore.
February 9th, 2021 17:41
The Mourning After The Morning After
orchidee said:
Someone on the gin?! Good write Alan.
February 9th, 2021 13:38
orchidee said:
Someone on the gin?! Good write Alan.
February 9th, 2021 13:38
The Mourning After The Morning After
dusk arising said:
A mournful air surely fills this with your well chosen words. The heavy head looking out from behind ones eyes and the familiar \'never again\' will chime with all who have stumbled back into reality the morning after.
Enjoyed reading this very much.
February 9th, 2021 13:20
dusk arising said:
A mournful air surely fills this with your well chosen words. The heavy head looking out from behind ones eyes and the familiar \'never again\' will chime with all who have stumbled back into reality the morning after.
Enjoyed reading this very much.
February 9th, 2021 13:20
The Mourning After The Morning After
Jerry Reynolds said:
Been there done that. Good read Alan.
February 9th, 2021 10:45
Jerry Reynolds said:
Been there done that. Good read Alan.
February 9th, 2021 10:45
When Once I was Ten
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, wisely choosing to utilise rhyming\'s whimsical element, to help imbue youth\'s \'carefree\' gaiety within your words of longing and remembrance,
a beautiful read from start to finish
January 21st, 2021 05:47
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful flow, wisely choosing to utilise rhyming\'s whimsical element, to help imbue youth\'s \'carefree\' gaiety within your words of longing and remembrance,
a beautiful read from start to finish
January 21st, 2021 05:47
When Once I was Ten
Goldfinch60 said:
Such innocent times brought back in your words Alan.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Such innocent times brought back in your words Alan.
Andy
January 21st, 2021 01:30
When Once I was Ten
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poem, plus the colouring you’ve added in your comments, paint a picture of an idyllic environment you both lived and are living in, Alan. Congratulations.
Dave
January 20th, 2021 17:21
Doggerel Dave said:
Your poem, plus the colouring you’ve added in your comments, paint a picture of an idyllic environment you both lived and are living in, Alan. Congratulations.
Dave
January 20th, 2021 17:21
When Once I was Ten
jarcher54 said:
Thanks giving us all an excuse to look back. Playful, sincere, and yet just the right degree of sentimentality. Love the line: No more I live where I was king.
January 20th, 2021 10:48
jarcher54 said:
Thanks giving us all an excuse to look back. Playful, sincere, and yet just the right degree of sentimentality. Love the line: No more I live where I was king.
January 20th, 2021 10:48
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