Comments received on poems by TheLonelyPoet90
Thoughts of a survivor
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully impowering, we curate ourselves into what we want to believe of ourselves, and your words voice a soul determined to utilise the limited time in life and avoid becoming another digit in the annals of surrender, good write:
\'In the end of my story,
I\'m in this battle alone.
Like dancing, steps forward and backwards,
Small steps until I\'m completely grown.\'
(a gentle heads-up that I noticed a few unorthodoxly spelt words, if this was on purpose by design of your creative licence then all good, sorry to mention it)
October 26th, 2020 04:03
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully impowering, we curate ourselves into what we want to believe of ourselves, and your words voice a soul determined to utilise the limited time in life and avoid becoming another digit in the annals of surrender, good write:
\'In the end of my story,
I\'m in this battle alone.
Like dancing, steps forward and backwards,
Small steps until I\'m completely grown.\'
(a gentle heads-up that I noticed a few unorthodoxly spelt words, if this was on purpose by design of your creative licence then all good, sorry to mention it)
October 26th, 2020 04:03
Thoughts of a survivor
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be stronger each day you move forward helped by the words that you are writing.
Andy
October 26th, 2020 02:20
Goldfinch60 said:
You will be stronger each day you move forward helped by the words that you are writing.
Andy
October 26th, 2020 02:20
Thoughts of a survivor
jarcher54 said:
You may feel alone in the little world that includes the perpetrator, but you are not alone in the larger world. There is no more powerful title than survivor. I for one am impressed by your confidence and eloquence.
October 26th, 2020 00:38
jarcher54 said:
You may feel alone in the little world that includes the perpetrator, but you are not alone in the larger world. There is no more powerful title than survivor. I for one am impressed by your confidence and eloquence.
October 26th, 2020 00:38
Slowly
Goldfinch60 said:
From those ashes new life will come and the wonder of that life is yours Jade.
Welcome to MPS.
September 17th, 2019 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
From those ashes new life will come and the wonder of that life is yours Jade.
Welcome to MPS.
September 17th, 2019 00:49
Slowly
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing your first Poem - FRIEND Im 31 and i know it can happen ! I was let down by MEN in my 20s and slowly things began to die. But I met BRIAN (my Fiance) a couple of Years ago and I came back to life again ! We are getting married in 2020 ! Im praying that things will turn out better for YOU in the FUTURE !
Blesings & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check our SITE - Thanks
September 16th, 2019 17:00
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing your first Poem - FRIEND Im 31 and i know it can happen ! I was let down by MEN in my 20s and slowly things began to die. But I met BRIAN (my Fiance) a couple of Years ago and I came back to life again ! We are getting married in 2020 ! Im praying that things will turn out better for YOU in the FUTURE !
Blesings & Peace
Love ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
Please check our SITE - Thanks
September 16th, 2019 17:00
