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L. B. Mek said:
\'I try to perfect many talents
But a profession I can never chose\'..
these words hit home
and landed, deep..
a great write!
such a deeply considered poem
thank you! dear Poet
August 16th, 2022 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'I try to perfect many talents
But a profession I can never chose\'..
these words hit home
and landed, deep..
a great write!
such a deeply considered poem
thank you! dear Poet
August 16th, 2022 04:58
Bound By Walls
Goldfinch60 said:
In these current time in the UK we are trapped by those walls but very soon the doors will open out to a life beyond those walls and life will be wonderful once more.
Andy
February 21st, 2021 01:38
Goldfinch60 said:
In these current time in the UK we are trapped by those walls but very soon the doors will open out to a life beyond those walls and life will be wonderful once more.
Andy
February 21st, 2021 01:38
Masks
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning SUNSEEKER welcpme to MPS. It is a proactive site which opperates by reading & commenting on aech others POEMS ! Thank you for Your first Poem. It is elegantly penned - four quatrains wiith a consistent Rhyme pattern xaxa xbxb etc.The subject MASKS - is interesting and topical ! Before COVID 19 People generally wore MASKS for sinister reasons and to hide their identity as suggested in your POEM. My Parents taught me to avoid such poeple. They still exist ! In the UK and Worlwide COVID 19 Masks are now worn to protect ourselves & others from the VIRUS ! Thanks for caring & sharing.
Love & Peace & Joy to You Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
June 15th, 2020 01:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Morning SUNSEEKER welcpme to MPS. It is a proactive site which opperates by reading & commenting on aech others POEMS ! Thank you for Your first Poem. It is elegantly penned - four quatrains wiith a consistent Rhyme pattern xaxa xbxb etc.The subject MASKS - is interesting and topical ! Before COVID 19 People generally wore MASKS for sinister reasons and to hide their identity as suggested in your POEM. My Parents taught me to avoid such poeple. They still exist ! In the UK and Worlwide COVID 19 Masks are now worn to protect ourselves & others from the VIRUS ! Thanks for caring & sharing.
Love & Peace & Joy to You Yours
ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛💛💛
June 15th, 2020 01:15
Mother Nature
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is there for us all as your words remind us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Mother Nature is there for us all as your words remind us.
Andy
June 6th, 2020 00:52
Mother Nature
Fay Slimm. said:
Your lovely rhyme is a worthy tribute to the real connection through all our senses to our great Mother Nature.
June 5th, 2020 04:44
Fay Slimm. said:
Your lovely rhyme is a worthy tribute to the real connection through all our senses to our great Mother Nature.
June 5th, 2020 04:44
Melancholy
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, maybe one day soon it will be the close season and all will be well.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 00:43
Goldfinch60 said:
Good emotive write, maybe one day soon it will be the close season and all will be well.
Andy
May 24th, 2020 00:43
The art of escape
Goldfinch60 said:
Paradise is there for us in our minds. Yes I would go to find it.
May 21st, 2020 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Paradise is there for us in our minds. Yes I would go to find it.
May 21st, 2020 00:41
The Bandit Of the Night
Goldfinch60 said:
I too could see this person in my minds eye. Good write.
May 20th, 2020 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
I too could see this person in my minds eye. Good write.
May 20th, 2020 00:18
The Bandit Of the Night
WildMoonChild said:
I could really picture him reading this
May 19th, 2020 22:54
WildMoonChild said:
I could really picture him reading this
May 19th, 2020 22:54
Halfbreed
FredPeyer said:
Aloha Thesunseeker,
Your well written poem struck a note with me. I am white, my wife is Chinese and my three (now adult) kids are \"hapa\" (Hawaiian for \'half\'). Growing up in Hawaii, where so many are mixed, it was not a problem at all, but they too had their share of stereotyping, especially on the mainland. Love the ending of your poem. Lead away!!!
November 6th, 2019 13:30
FredPeyer said:
Aloha Thesunseeker,
Your well written poem struck a note with me. I am white, my wife is Chinese and my three (now adult) kids are \"hapa\" (Hawaiian for \'half\'). Growing up in Hawaii, where so many are mixed, it was not a problem at all, but they too had their share of stereotyping, especially on the mainland. Love the ending of your poem. Lead away!!!
November 6th, 2019 13:30
Price of freedom
Cave_Dweller said:
I like how it made me look at freedom in a different way.
November 6th, 2019 10:48
Cave_Dweller said:
I like how it made me look at freedom in a different way.
November 6th, 2019 10:48
Beckoning Storm
elphaba993 said:
This is amazing. I really love the image you created
October 30th, 2019 16:08
elphaba993 said:
This is amazing. I really love the image you created
October 30th, 2019 16:08
Warrior
Clara said:
Rather beautiful imagery you\'ve created here... And quite the story. Leaves me wanting more!
October 10th, 2019 16:19
Clara said:
Rather beautiful imagery you\'ve created here... And quite the story. Leaves me wanting more!
October 10th, 2019 16:19
Staircase to oblivion
Goldfinch60 said:
All you need to do is repair that faulty step and then use it to climb up to the wonderful future that is there for you.
Welcome to MPS.
October 3rd, 2019 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
All you need to do is repair that faulty step and then use it to climb up to the wonderful future that is there for you.
Welcome to MPS.
October 3rd, 2019 01:40
Staircase to oblivion
dusk arising said:
But if you can see the direction is downward then you must be observing from a place above that. In reality you are above that and remain so.
I guess that once you realise the reality of that then it can become the key to uplifting your spirit/thoughts.
Or do you think i\'m being to simplistic?
Great piece of provokative writing from you.
October 2nd, 2019 16:48
dusk arising said:
But if you can see the direction is downward then you must be observing from a place above that. In reality you are above that and remain so.
I guess that once you realise the reality of that then it can become the key to uplifting your spirit/thoughts.
Or do you think i\'m being to simplistic?
Great piece of provokative writing from you.
October 2nd, 2019 16:48
