The trials of a bookworm
A said:

Lol I really enjoyed your poem. I feel like you really honestly captured that limitless feeling that books take you through. Perfectly executed that description of being taken into a different world. What a wonderful poem.~

December 4th, 2019 23:25

Post Mortem
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

BRIAN & ANGELA HERE ! Welcome to MPS KIRSTY ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! Excellent Structure ~ four balanced quatrains with good metre and a consident Rhyme Pattern xaxa xbxb etc. The Subject is very interesting !
V1. Eternal Life - In Heaven (with GOD) or Hell (without GOD) - GOD decides ! Unlike other Animals MAN has an imortal SOUL therefore we live on somewhere for ever !
V2. Death is the END !
V3. REINCARNATION ! After Death we can come back to EARTH as another Human or an insect or an Animal ! I want to be a pampered CAT !
V4. All Matter consists of the 92 naturally occuring ELEMENTS from HYDROGEN (1) to URANIUM (92). When a plant or an animal or a HUMAN die their constiuant ELEMENTS are recycled throughout Planet Earth (not an atom is lost !) by the natural CYCLES ! Carbon - Nitrogen - Oxygen - Phosphorus etc etc. That what will happen to out PHYSICAL BODIES after DEATH - Whether we are CREMATED ~ BURIED or DIE @ SEA ! Religion would argue that the Imortal Human Soul passes out of the Earths orbit into anorher dimension ! There is much food for thought in your excellent POEM ! MPS works by reading & commenting on each others Poetry. Please check our site ~ we are an Engaged Couple living in Southern England (UK). Angela has just returned from 15 months Work Exchange in New Zealand ~ OK !

Peace & Joy to YOU
Yours A & B 🧡💙🧡💙🧡

October 20th, 2019 16:16