Comments received on poems by Hesper J.



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Rocky Lagou said:

An amazing metaphor. Very true message, without proper care of mental health we can \"slip\" into attacks and breakdowns. A great poem!

April 27th, 2022 09:20

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L. B. Mek said:

\'this is a good thing\', indeed
(thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply below)
\'doubt is the seed, to our worth
so
we should quest, for the right questions
and grip All certainties, lightly
for
our perspective, scales
with our wisdom
and that
takes Time, to realise
and chance to materialise...\'

January 20th, 2022 07:40

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Keith said:

Like this one a lot...clever and poignant...

January 20th, 2022 05:59