Comments received on poems by Julianna

I Cant Believe We Just Met

ANGELA HERE - Good morning Julianna thanks for a lovely Poem on a lovely Topic ~ BEST FRIENDS ! All Girls have *BESSIES* at School and they are very important in our lives ! We are sad when we lose one and very happy when we find a new one ! My Bessie @ the Moment is RUTH (whom I work with) she recently came to New Zealand with me on Work exchange for 15 months ! I was a BRIDESMAID @ her Wedding last December and she will be Matron of Honour at Mine. I dont go to many School Reunions (London) so I have lost touch with most of my School Friends. Ruths Husband David is Brians Friend and he will be Best Man @ our Wedding ~ AMEN In my experience BEST FRIENDS are just like Brothers & Sisters and play a very important part in our lives ! BRIAN is my best Male Friend for ever & ever ! Where He goes I will go - His Family will be my Family and His God (The Holy Trinity - Father - Son & Holy Spirit) my God - AMEN

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Your Friend ANGELA

February 7th, 2020 03:01

I Cant Believe We Just Met
Goldfinch60 said:

May that friend be with you forever, they are so special, I have just spent a couple of days with a friend I have known for about 35 years and it is still special.

February 6th, 2020 01:09

I Cant Believe We Just Met
dusk arising said:

For all of us out there/here hoping that we will one day meet a true soul mate... reading your words today shows us that yes, they do exist and it\'s never too late/
A pleasure to read.

February 5th, 2020 08:50

It’s Time to Go Home
Goldfinch60 said:

What a wonderful write Julianna, it is so awful that there are people in this world that want to harm others. May love come to our world.
Welcome to MPS.

February 5th, 2020 01:34

It’s Time to Go Home
bellskie said:

This poem really moved me. It actually made me well up, amazing work

February 4th, 2020 12:59

It’s Time to Go Home
Bragee said:

Heart felt piece full of emotion.
sad reality here in America.
The subtle sarcasm at the very end really seals in the reality of this situation.
Keep writing!

February 4th, 2020 12:15

It’s Time to Go Home

ANGELA HERE - HI JULIANNA - Welcome to MPS you will find it is a good site ! Thanks for sharing you first Poem it is awesome. It pulsates with rythm & action as becomes the tragic content. As a Young Lady you have shared the horror of the Subject very well and painted a word picture that is both graphic and salutary ~ AMEN. In American there is one gun for every person and School Shootings are increasingly common. Your Poem is all the more tragic because it was *Time to go Home !*

I wanna go home - 3 minutes to go - we hear the bell ring - BOOM BOOM - its a gun ! - I should be safe in my seat ? - bodies fall - Im down too - memories flash - then I close my eyes - I remember what I learned in class today - but I got no heartbeats left to say HURRAY - AMEN

Oooooo JULIANNA - This is so so moving that Im crying now thinking of the horror and the aftermath as your Parents are informed that their beautiful Daughter is in Paradise - BUT - NOT COMING HOME NO MORE ! A tragedy we must never take for granted - AMEN !

Guns are illegal in the UK but if President Trump read this he would be much less GUNG HO about the freedom of every American to posess a GUN ! Why not send Him a copy ? Thanks for caring - more Poems please. Ive saved this as a fave ! Im a Physiotherapist and part of my job is getting GUN & KNIFE victims mobile again !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours Angela πŸ§‘πŸ€πŸ’™
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February 4th, 2020 07:41