I Don’t Know Whether I Will Burn in Hellfire
Goldfinch60 said:

Welcome to MPS Kitty, your soul is not about to expire it is finding new life and will expand in joy and love.

Andy

February 7th, 2020 02:25

I Don’t Know Whether I Will Burn in Hellfire
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE - Hi KITTY (Love your Picture) welcome to MPS it is a good Poetry site ! It operates by comenting on each others POEMS - OK. Thanks for your first poem it is epic ! Five Balanced Stanzas of 4 5 4 5 (repeat of S 2.) 6 - easy to recite - and a single RHYME (Fire - Empire etc !) very clever !. I have saved it as a Favourite and requested MPS Friendship. More Poems please !
As to the content ! It is a quest ion we all ask when we look back on our lives (Im 31 !) Stanza 1. Paints a picture paints a picture of One pondering the past & future. S 2. (Refrian) Asks five questions about the future including the awesome title quandary *I Dont Know Whether I Will Burn in Hellfire* S 3. A surrealist quartet of haunting visions - scary ! S 4. (Refrian as S 2.) S 5. Descibes the horror of the visions in S 3. and a final line which suggests you are about to capitulate to your beasts (demons) ! We enjoyed your POEM and are comenting - OK

And my soul felt like it was about to expire !

Because Im a devout Catholic I could sermonise the antidote ! I have no fear of Death or Hell because I believe Christ atoned for our Sins on the Cross in AD 33 - Amen ! The BIBLE (John 3 v 16) exhorts us to believe in CHRISTS Redemption and *We shall not PERISH (in HELLFIRE) but have ETERNAL LIFE (in HEAVEN) - AMEN ! SATAN (The DEVIL) does not want us to believe that - SO - He torments US anout HELLFIRE and convinces us that is where we are headed - as described in Your Excellent Graphic Poem ! Thanks for sharing & scaring !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 💛💛💛
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February 6th, 2020 11:06