Comments received on poems by emme
Happiness
Goldfinch60 said:
Super positive write, those little things in life can make a good day great in many peoples lives.
Welcome to MPS.
February 9th, 2020 01:48
Goldfinch60 said:
Super positive write, those little things in life can make a good day great in many peoples lives.
Welcome to MPS.
February 9th, 2020 01:48
Happiness
Daydream Believer said:
This is a beautiful write. So much positivity and reminder that we donβt have to look that far to find some joy in life. My favourite part was the last two lines
Happiness appears in numerous forms;
Emerges like a rose amongst thorns.
It truly can just pop up in what feels like the most painful of times.
Just a wonderful piece
February 8th, 2020 15:10
Daydream Believer said:
This is a beautiful write. So much positivity and reminder that we donβt have to look that far to find some joy in life. My favourite part was the last two lines
Happiness appears in numerous forms;
Emerges like a rose amongst thorns.
It truly can just pop up in what feels like the most painful of times.
Just a wonderful piece
February 8th, 2020 15:10
Happiness
dusk arising said:
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on past my favourite line \'laughing with my face covered in years\'.
I love this poem and i don\'t believe i have ever stated that about any poem before.
So well composed, so positive and simply joyous. A must for my favourites.
Thank you.
February 8th, 2020 15:10
dusk arising said:
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on past my favourite line \'laughing with my face covered in years\'.
I love this poem and i don\'t believe i have ever stated that about any poem before.
So well composed, so positive and simply joyous. A must for my favourites.
Thank you.
February 8th, 2020 15:10
Happiness
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING EMME - Welcome to MPS you will find it a supporive & proactive site ! Thanks for your first poem - wicked ! Full of rhyme & rhythm & happiness just the antidote for a wet night ! Love all the positives I have saved it as a FAVE ! Warmth - chocolate - sunlight - laughter - light - birdsong - joy - imagination - meeting Loved Ones - stars twinkling - water music -
Happiness - like a Rose amonst Thorns - Awesome last line -
more Poems PLEASE ! I have sent an MPS FRIEND request
Love your quote about the LIGHT - AMEN
Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA ππππ
BRIAN is my Fiance - Please check our site - Thanks
February 8th, 2020 14:15
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - GOOD EVENING EMME - Welcome to MPS you will find it a supporive & proactive site ! Thanks for your first poem - wicked ! Full of rhyme & rhythm & happiness just the antidote for a wet night ! Love all the positives I have saved it as a FAVE ! Warmth - chocolate - sunlight - laughter - light - birdsong - joy - imagination - meeting Loved Ones - stars twinkling - water music -
Happiness - like a Rose amonst Thorns - Awesome last line -
more Poems PLEASE ! I have sent an MPS FRIEND request
Love your quote about the LIGHT - AMEN
Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Yours ANGELA ππππ
BRIAN is my Fiance - Please check our site - Thanks
February 8th, 2020 14:15
Happiness
dusk arising said:
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on past my favourite line \'laughing with my face covered in years\'.
I love this poem and i don\'t believe i have ever stated that about any poem before.
So well composed, so positive and simply joyous. A must for my favourites.
Thank you.
February 8th, 2020 13:57
dusk arising said:
Your second line brought a smile and the smile grew as i read on and on past my favourite line \'laughing with my face covered in years\'.
I love this poem and i don\'t believe i have ever stated that about any poem before.
So well composed, so positive and simply joyous. A must for my favourites.
Thank you.
February 8th, 2020 13:57