Comments received on poems by Kenjii



Player Two
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will be there for you Kenjii.

February 13th, 2020 03:03

5 Years Time
Goldfinch60 said:

May that freedom give you the glory of wonderful future.

Andy

February 12th, 2020 01:49

My Other Side
Goldfinch60 said:

That light is within your words, always be with the kight.

Andy

February 11th, 2020 02:23

The Beginning
Goldfinch60 said:

This works very well in a rap rhythm.

Welcome to MPS.

February 10th, 2020 02:44

The Beginning
Joker Wood said:

Cool...kinda like Rap Music.

February 10th, 2020 01:36

The Beginning
dusk arising said:

Have you considered that poetry with rhyming lines one after the other actually limits the words available to express yourself. Freeing yourself up from simple rhyme will increase the vocabulary.

February 9th, 2020 19:07