Comments received on poems by ontheedge



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Goldfinch60 said:

There is no way you are weak when writing words like these, that strength will be forever within you as you lead your lives together.

Welcome to MPS.

February 19th, 2020 02:42

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD MORNING FRIEND - Welcome to MPS - It is an empathetic site as many Members are *On The Edge* (good pen name) for one reason or another. BRIAN & I are getting married in April and all the Planning and buying our first House etc puts one nearer & nearer to the edge ! As a RELATIONSHIP develops we do allow our Partner to consume us (and soem of our traits) and vice-versa. Brian & I try to work things out together withut losing our indiiduality and independence. The areas you mention are important both collectively and individually ! Love - Protection - Strength - Happiness - Approval & Self ! Male & Female are very different in so many ways - but it always *Takes Two to Tango* and we love Latin Dances ! Thanks for caring & sharing !

Every Blessing now & in the Future
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
Please check our site - Thanks A & B !

February 18th, 2020 04:54

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dusk arising said:

Reading between the lines of this you certainly devalue your worth in your own estimation. Or are you being manipulated by a player?

It all comes thru the mood picture you have created in this piece.

February 18th, 2020 04:13