Comments received on poems by railasunshine
Thoughts at a Restless Bar
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of conscience speaking. Nicely written a poem of shame.
April 28th, 2025 04:45
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of conscience speaking. Nicely written a poem of shame.
April 28th, 2025 04:45
Thoughts at a Restless Bar
Mourgana of the Fey said:
To me this poem was one that meandered into many different waves of events emotions perhaps one can call it cross roads or even personal moments of imploding crisis through out a life. The story you tell can be a great metaphor for others to serve as a mirror. I liked the way you have build this piece up, the snippets of conversing, it felt like you were confiding in the readers ears. I enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:28
Mourgana of the Fey said:
To me this poem was one that meandered into many different waves of events emotions perhaps one can call it cross roads or even personal moments of imploding crisis through out a life. The story you tell can be a great metaphor for others to serve as a mirror. I liked the way you have build this piece up, the snippets of conversing, it felt like you were confiding in the readers ears. I enjoyed the read!
April 28th, 2025 02:28
Nicotine Spirit
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I\'m in the same boat..if its not one thing its another...lol.
I enjoyed this very much
March 9th, 2020 20:21
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
I\'m in the same boat..if its not one thing its another...lol.
I enjoyed this very much
March 9th, 2020 20:21
Contrary Thoughts for a Broken Man
Saxon Crow said:
OOOooooooo - Who are you referring to?!?!? NICE poem
March 9th, 2020 08:58
Saxon Crow said:
OOOooooooo - Who are you referring to?!?!? NICE poem
March 9th, 2020 08:58
Broken Limb
Saxon Crow said:
Some wounds never heal. But they remind us how strong we are. Thanks for reminding me through this poem
March 6th, 2020 16:53
Saxon Crow said:
Some wounds never heal. But they remind us how strong we are. Thanks for reminding me through this poem
March 6th, 2020 16:53
Honest Faults
Clara said:
I can say with some certainty that this has probably rang true for a lot of women. Well written.
March 5th, 2020 10:22
Clara said:
I can say with some certainty that this has probably rang true for a lot of women. Well written.
March 5th, 2020 10:22
Honest Faults
dusk arising said:
Nice one. Your piece today tells it from the woman\'s angle when the guy had adopted the ploy of \"treat \'em mean and keep \'em keen\".
March 5th, 2020 05:01
dusk arising said:
Nice one. Your piece today tells it from the woman\'s angle when the guy had adopted the ploy of \"treat \'em mean and keep \'em keen\".
March 5th, 2020 05:01
Scarlet’s Letter
MendedFences27 said:
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3.
This is an unusual take on lost love. We all end up with some \"regrets\" in life. Try not to be sad. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2020 23:43
MendedFences27 said:
I like the rhythm and rhyme of this, but am confused by stanza 3.
This is an unusual take on lost love. We all end up with some \"regrets\" in life. Try not to be sad. - Phil A.
March 2nd, 2020 23:43
