Comments received on poems by mmoonshine



his girl
Goldfinch60 said:

And may their souls combine into one.

March 23rd, 2020 01:08

failure isn’t an option
dusk arising said:

Refreshing to know that we all have a past. As our past grows so hopefully does wisdom.
If one keeps doing the same thing and expecting a different result then the path to madness lies ahead.

March 19th, 2020 14:16

happiness (iv)
dusk arising said:

True love won\'t have you feeling like that you know. I\'m guessing you\'re learning about love. What you describe is a love which cannot mature into true love. Other loves will come and go, each teaching. The biggest lesson of all though, is the lesson of learning to love ones self. Until we love ourselves, we cannot fully love another.

Great poem though. Really descriptive without turning into a dirge we see all too often on mps.

March 18th, 2020 13:42

happiness (iv)
Mil57Man said:

A lovely poem. Love is really strange, true love will never change.

March 18th, 2020 08:13

ride (i)
Goldfinch60 said:

There are always other rides at the carnival.

Welcome to MPS.

March 16th, 2020 00:49

ride (i)
dusk arising said:

I hope someone bought you a toffee apple after the wheels fell off.

March 15th, 2020 23:23