Comments received on poems by duneman
Wings of Wax
baj-a said:
I feel this is more than about Icarus and his plight, but a metaphor of life and learning. well written.
March 13th, 2013 17:02
baj-a said:
I feel this is more than about Icarus and his plight, but a metaphor of life and learning. well written.
March 13th, 2013 17:02
Train Tracks
diamonddagger said:
I love the sound of the train whistle also. It's such a lonely sound. I like to count cars when I'm waiting for a train. I love the graffiti on some of the cars. Great write.
March 11th, 2013 20:20
diamonddagger said:
I love the sound of the train whistle also. It's such a lonely sound. I like to count cars when I'm waiting for a train. I love the graffiti on some of the cars. Great write.
March 11th, 2013 20:20
Cat Dance on the Keyboard
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Duneman... I had to look close to see the kitten you're holding in your avatar. I do know how it is to have a cat that does not like poetry, at least me writing on his time. I almost gave up on caring a notepad to bed. My cat Johnny likes to come and lay down on my chest when I am writing and he is a very I am going to get my way cat.
Nice little tribute... BWP... James...
March 9th, 2013 19:44
BrokenWordsPoet said:
Duneman... I had to look close to see the kitten you're holding in your avatar. I do know how it is to have a cat that does not like poetry, at least me writing on his time. I almost gave up on caring a notepad to bed. My cat Johnny likes to come and lay down on my chest when I am writing and he is a very I am going to get my way cat.
Nice little tribute... BWP... James...
March 9th, 2013 19:44
Cat Dance on the Keyboard
baj-a said:
lmao! yep! I know what you mean! those pesky cats do seem to like to add their own two cents to whatever we humans are typing. and of course if you are reading a book they have to put their fuzzy little bodies between you and it because of course you would rather be petting them than reading! fun write!
March 9th, 2013 08:25
baj-a said:
lmao! yep! I know what you mean! those pesky cats do seem to like to add their own two cents to whatever we humans are typing. and of course if you are reading a book they have to put their fuzzy little bodies between you and it because of course you would rather be petting them than reading! fun write!
March 9th, 2013 08:25
Train Tracks
sokibgb said:
Living in New York City the sounds of the subway trains was a constant part of my life. To this day I love that sound. It never fails to remind me of all the places I visited and all my friends and I traveled all over the city learning all the routes and stations. Thanks for sharing, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:15
sokibgb said:
Living in New York City the sounds of the subway trains was a constant part of my life. To this day I love that sound. It never fails to remind me of all the places I visited and all my friends and I traveled all over the city learning all the routes and stations. Thanks for sharing, soki
March 8th, 2013 08:15
Train Tracks
BrokenWordsPoet said:
There is a sadness in this poem. My brother in law he and his wife use to live in a house right beside the intersection of their home and the whistle could be heard all hours of the night; they are both gone now and I miss pocking fun at them asking them if they were ever making love and the train was blowing the whistle. I love your little poem, I love any poem that reminds me of a life story.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 19:15
BrokenWordsPoet said:
There is a sadness in this poem. My brother in law he and his wife use to live in a house right beside the intersection of their home and the whistle could be heard all hours of the night; they are both gone now and I miss pocking fun at them asking them if they were ever making love and the train was blowing the whistle. I love your little poem, I love any poem that reminds me of a life story.
BWP... James...
March 7th, 2013 19:15
Train Tracks
baj-a said:
I used to fall asleep to the sound of trains running along the tracks and to this day find the sound peaceful and calming. A lovely remembrance poem.
March 7th, 2013 16:16
baj-a said:
I used to fall asleep to the sound of trains running along the tracks and to this day find the sound peaceful and calming. A lovely remembrance poem.
March 7th, 2013 16:16
