Comments received on poems by JayPoetry
Butterfly
Soumita Sarkar said:
Metaphor of butterfly worked..........Please read my poems and comment.
October 8th, 2013 10:57
Soumita Sarkar said:
Metaphor of butterfly worked..........Please read my poems and comment.
October 8th, 2013 10:57
Butterfly
diamonddagger said:
beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it very much. The butterfly of love is very elusive and if you can hold it gently it will stay of it's own accord.
April 2nd, 2013 22:05
diamonddagger said:
beautiful write. I enjoyed reading it very much. The butterfly of love is very elusive and if you can hold it gently it will stay of it's own accord.
April 2nd, 2013 22:05
Butterfly
sokibgb said:
Beautiful Jay, hope your Butterfly flies right back to you, soki
April 2nd, 2013 22:03
sokibgb said:
Beautiful Jay, hope your Butterfly flies right back to you, soki
April 2nd, 2013 22:03
Butterfly
baj-a said:
sweet and lovely write about that oh so elusive butterfly of love. :-)
April 2nd, 2013 07:23
baj-a said:
sweet and lovely write about that oh so elusive butterfly of love. :-)
April 2nd, 2013 07:23
New Age Philosophy
baj-a said:
sometimes the harsh realities of life make the best poems because they are that real and that meaningful. this is one of those poems. what happened to the last line though... it seems to end without an end :-)
March 31st, 2013 08:15
baj-a said:
sometimes the harsh realities of life make the best poems because they are that real and that meaningful. this is one of those poems. what happened to the last line though... it seems to end without an end :-)
March 31st, 2013 08:15
The Inner Truth
baj-a said:
mental anguish of any kind regardless of what brings it on is painful and frightening at times. we need to find some hope to hold onto and understand that if we allow others to help we will find the light in the darkness. I really loved the line... Though one day like alchemy I'll make love from the pain.
March 30th, 2013 09:00
baj-a said:
mental anguish of any kind regardless of what brings it on is painful and frightening at times. we need to find some hope to hold onto and understand that if we allow others to help we will find the light in the darkness. I really loved the line... Though one day like alchemy I'll make love from the pain.
March 30th, 2013 09:00
My Report
sokibgb said:
Music soothes my soul and makes me whole too Jay but not giving in to wine or giving up makes me strong. BE whole be strong and keep on telling the truth like you do beautifully and with no regrets, soki
March 30th, 2013 07:41
sokibgb said:
Music soothes my soul and makes me whole too Jay but not giving in to wine or giving up makes me strong. BE whole be strong and keep on telling the truth like you do beautifully and with no regrets, soki
March 30th, 2013 07:41
The Inner Truth
sokibgb said:
Will the real Jay please stand up and show his world his heart and love.a very old movie said- Love is never having to say you are sorry
but real love is sharing, taking responsability for your actions and never hurting the one you love. If GOD has being kind to you with someonry who loves you so much the way you are, thank him, man up and get clean , accept your heart, your love your feelings and share it all with her. real love comes once don't lose it or you will regret it forever, soki
March 30th, 2013 07:26
sokibgb said:
Will the real Jay please stand up and show his world his heart and love.a very old movie said- Love is never having to say you are sorry
but real love is sharing, taking responsability for your actions and never hurting the one you love. If GOD has being kind to you with someonry who loves you so much the way you are, thank him, man up and get clean , accept your heart, your love your feelings and share it all with her. real love comes once don't lose it or you will regret it forever, soki
March 30th, 2013 07:26
My Report
JayPoetry said:
Thank, you it was just one of those days for the truth to be told.
March 29th, 2013 10:39
JayPoetry said:
Thank, you it was just one of those days for the truth to be told.
March 29th, 2013 10:39
My Report
baj-a said:
wow! dark and filled with harsh realities and well written! I especially love the line 'Like Poetry over Heaven’s Melody' ... that is a definite wow line :-)
March 29th, 2013 07:56
baj-a said:
wow! dark and filled with harsh realities and well written! I especially love the line 'Like Poetry over Heaven’s Melody' ... that is a definite wow line :-)
March 29th, 2013 07:56
Cold World
baj-a said:
well written and powerful in the truth it tells. your use of imagery is inspired.
March 28th, 2013 07:07
baj-a said:
well written and powerful in the truth it tells. your use of imagery is inspired.
March 28th, 2013 07:07
