Comments received on poems by Madyson
I can’t be first
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, being so badly hurt in the first place is so hard but you should move forward sometime and maybe this is the right time.
August 21st, 2020 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write, being so badly hurt in the first place is so hard but you should move forward sometime and maybe this is the right time.
August 21st, 2020 00:00
Tomorrow I won’t.
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we need to shed: to make room for the \'better\' new
I\'m drawn to your sparse non-abstracted style, so relatable and genuine, your writing reminds me of India Arie\'s songs, (not comparing your writing in skill or style), but for me at least: they both feature a unique quality, that triggers an instantaneous response - sometimes unwillingly, a truly wonderful gift for a creative creator, in any genre
keep sharpening your poetic skills while staying true to your unique voice, I am genuinely excited to read your future offerings
August 20th, 2020 05:38
L. B. Mek said:
yes, we need to shed: to make room for the \'better\' new
I\'m drawn to your sparse non-abstracted style, so relatable and genuine, your writing reminds me of India Arie\'s songs, (not comparing your writing in skill or style), but for me at least: they both feature a unique quality, that triggers an instantaneous response - sometimes unwillingly, a truly wonderful gift for a creative creator, in any genre
keep sharpening your poetic skills while staying true to your unique voice, I am genuinely excited to read your future offerings
August 20th, 2020 05:38
grey area
L. B. Mek said:
I like the metaphors, I like the flow of your words and lines, but I cherish that shard of you imbedded - unmistakeably, within the humility of truth you penned,
the clever contrast in how most people see bright colours and rainbows when depicting love, where as you keep it real and grounded in the brevity grey - of reality\'s streets,
a warm and ambitious effort, wonderfully executed
August 20th, 2020 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
I like the metaphors, I like the flow of your words and lines, but I cherish that shard of you imbedded - unmistakeably, within the humility of truth you penned,
the clever contrast in how most people see bright colours and rainbows when depicting love, where as you keep it real and grounded in the brevity grey - of reality\'s streets,
a warm and ambitious effort, wonderfully executed
August 20th, 2020 04:38
grey area
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within you shows that grey can deal with life far more easily than black and white.
Andy
August 20th, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
That peace within you shows that grey can deal with life far more easily than black and white.
Andy
August 20th, 2020 00:10
grey area
dusk arising said:
grey, opposites blend to a peaceful shade where both are discernable and both willingly suppressed.
like the solution to an equasion for strength and harmony.
August 19th, 2020 15:35
dusk arising said:
grey, opposites blend to a peaceful shade where both are discernable and both willingly suppressed.
like the solution to an equasion for strength and harmony.
August 19th, 2020 15:35
Tomorrow I won’t.
Goldfinch60 said:
You may be thinking of him in the past but you must move on into your future, the future is where you are going, the past is what you have left behind. Always move forward.
Good words Maddy, welcome to MPS.
August 19th, 2020 00:34
Goldfinch60 said:
You may be thinking of him in the past but you must move on into your future, the future is where you are going, the past is what you have left behind. Always move forward.
Good words Maddy, welcome to MPS.
August 19th, 2020 00:34
