Comments received on poems by mazen.safadi
Farewell, you said
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully immersive, had to read again cause I just flew through it the first time...
really well executed, a great read
February 2nd, 2021 05:11
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully immersive, had to read again cause I just flew through it the first time...
really well executed, a great read
February 2nd, 2021 05:11
Farewell
L. B. Mek said:
let all yesterday\'s be our burial ground for the pavemented city zones of all things bleak: in our reality,
onwards - to that daybreak of a clean slate, upon nature\'s untamed green: where to next?
like your positivity, more power to you!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled response,
December 14th, 2020 05:50
L. B. Mek said:
let all yesterday\'s be our burial ground for the pavemented city zones of all things bleak: in our reality,
onwards - to that daybreak of a clean slate, upon nature\'s untamed green: where to next?
like your positivity, more power to you!
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled response,
December 14th, 2020 05:50
The ignorant Sun
Jerry Reynolds said:
Enjoyed the read-
The first 4 lines were
Great
December 2nd, 2020 08:42
Jerry Reynolds said:
Enjoyed the read-
The first 4 lines were
Great
December 2nd, 2020 08:42
Space
Goldfinch60 said:
True love goes in many directions and in many ways.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 01:14
Goldfinch60 said:
True love goes in many directions and in many ways.
Andy
November 25th, 2020 01:14
Soaked in life
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is not a dream it is what we make it and your dream shows you the beauty of your life.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 01:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Life is not a dream it is what we make it and your dream shows you the beauty of your life.
Andy
November 14th, 2020 01:58
A glimpse into heaven
Crowns4Christ said:
you put the feeling of love into words
October 12th, 2020 13:52
Crowns4Christ said:
you put the feeling of love into words
October 12th, 2020 13:52
Uncertain destinies
Goldfinch60 said:
That true love is forever there in our lives.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 00:16
Goldfinch60 said:
That true love is forever there in our lives.
Andy
October 6th, 2020 00:16
Us
Goldfinch60 said:
You will both go on to eternity with such fine words as these.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
You will both go on to eternity with such fine words as these.
Andy
October 1st, 2020 00:12
OLIVIA
Goldfinch60 said:
May that start of new life be there forever.
Welcome to MPS.
August 27th, 2020 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
May that start of new life be there forever.
Welcome to MPS.
August 27th, 2020 01:23
OLIVIA
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my WIFE ANGELA) Good Evening MAZEN ~ Welcome to MPS - It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each outhers Poems - OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Then you for your first Poem - which is very elegantly penned ! Six balanced Quatrains with a consistent abab etc rhyme pattern ! The Subject is interesting the inevtable effect of the passage of time on ones ~ Eyes - Skin - Voice & readiness of Tears ! I often ask myself how will I cope in 50 Years time (Im 37) when my TIME comes & my HEART almost ceases to beat. Thanks for a very Thought provoking POEM in the form of a LETTER - More please !
Love - Joy - Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 17:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (I share this site with my WIFE ANGELA) Good Evening MAZEN ~ Welcome to MPS - It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each outhers Poems - OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Then you for your first Poem - which is very elegantly penned ! Six balanced Quatrains with a consistent abab etc rhyme pattern ! The Subject is interesting the inevtable effect of the passage of time on ones ~ Eyes - Skin - Voice & readiness of Tears ! I often ask myself how will I cope in 50 Years time (Im 37) when my TIME comes & my HEART almost ceases to beat. Thanks for a very Thought provoking POEM in the form of a LETTER - More please !
Love - Joy - Peace
ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙
August 26th, 2020 17:16
