Comments received on poems by SpiceNoodles



Another Bout of Loneliness Overtakes Me
L. B. Mek said:

the first stanza, is a match for some of the most authentically vulnerable and brave lines I have read on MPS,
brilliant!

October 8th, 2020 02:18

Another Bout of Loneliness Overtakes Me
Lorna said:

This caught loneliness.... good one......

October 8th, 2020 01:25

Little creatures
L. B. Mek said:

we are all \'little critters\' in the great scheme of things I guess,
oh but what a walking - talking miracle of existence we all are...

October 6th, 2020 03:11

The Vibrancy of Living
Goldfinch60 said:

Those colours will be within you forever.

Andy

October 5th, 2020 00:06

The Bottom From Where I Continue to Emerge
L. B. Mek said:

there is a rhythm to our pulsed existence, up and down it pumps - round n round our blood flows,
our lives too: seem to reflect that same cyclical jagged inconsistency, in the pebbled paths we traverse, from one day to the next

October 1st, 2020 03:23

The Bottom From Where I Continue to Emerge
orchidee said:

You keep going down the plug hole, as a \'spiral\' of water?!
Yet hopefully not bottomless. It\'s said that when we reach the bottom, the only way remaining is up! Easy to just say that, I know. More difficult in the experience of it.

October 1st, 2020 02:01

The Bottom From Where I Continue to Emerge
Goldfinch60 said:

One day you will conquer that fall a move upward to a great life.

Welcome to MPS.

October 1st, 2020 00:16