Comments received on poems by AmyCassidyKurohoshie



Just Me
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing read
from a passionate wordsmith,
thanks for sharing

July 15th, 2021 03:30

Just Me
peto said:

Wow
You sound pissed off and let down in this
Brilliantly conveyed
An amazing read from the second you devoured the knife
Will be looking at more from you
Superb

July 14th, 2021 15:03

Anger
aDarkerMind said:

a write of true heartache Amy, fuelled on pain.
a true work of art none the less.

July 11th, 2021 13:50

Rejection Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:

Beneath that metal the love within you exists and it will break through and make your life wonderful and full of love for both yourself and all around you.

Andy

July 7th, 2021 00:55

Rejection Perfection
Having hope said:

Good words 🙂

July 6th, 2021 09:19

Incomplete
L. B. Mek said:

still alive and through your words
shining bright! in that forest of night
there is a resurgence of spirit
even in the pain you depict
like Shakespeare clarified
there is a sweetness
to our parting of sorrow,
and its with that tenderness
your poems resonates,
an unyielding defiance:
\'I want to run
Barefeet through the stream
With a group of people
Whom I all love

Let it all repeat
No words enough anymore
To describe my desire\'
\'Close your eyes
Can´t you see?
\'I am still alive
After all\'
(what a beautiful read
thank you for sharing, dear poet)

July 6th, 2021 02:31

Incomplete
Goldfinch60 said:

Stay alive Amy your life is ahead of you and it will be wonderful.

Andy

July 6th, 2021 01:03

Freedom, A Kingdom
L. B. Mek said:

fortunately its summer, around my way
but I recognise
the clouds in the sky\'s: of your words
and I relate
truly, seemingly - we\'re all just a verse
or a stanza
from belated realisation\'s, blinked
change
to our perspective\'s: brighter horizons...
thanks for sharing, such a wonderful read

July 5th, 2021 06:05

Freedom, A Kingdom
flyingfish said:

Recall John Lennon. I enjoyed it. Cheers,

July 4th, 2021 18:04

The Last String
MendedFences27 said:

A beautiful description of chasing youthful dreams, while at the same time divulging growing impatience. If it\'s real it is worth waiting, if not set it free. The future is always far off, but in reality life is very short. Sometimes in life one comes to a crossroad and must choose, if traveling with another both face a decision. Choose wisely. Seven years seems a long time to wait.
You have expressed all of this in a short and concise format, Your word choices are unique, colorful, clever, and thought provoking. Especially enjoyed your vision of \"Wisdom\" and your entire seventh stanza, from \"I want to see\" to \"invites warmth inside.\" - Phil A.

July 3rd, 2021 18:29

May Flowers
rebmasters said:

I particularly enjoyed these evocative lines:

\"The blazing sun high above
It burns my skin

Red just may become my favorite color\"

A beautiful narrative journey weaved within your words

July 2nd, 2021 10:40

April Showers
yellowrose said:

Good poem )

July 2nd, 2021 10:18

May Flowers
yellowrose said:

A good read ) nice choice of words

July 2nd, 2021 10:16

April Showers
Goldfinch60 said:

That path before you will take you into the glory of your life, just take that first step and all will be wonderful.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:22

Breathlessness
L. B. Mek said:

intriguing, reads like notes
on a journey of introspection..
still, first we learn to crawl
then stand - then quickly fall
then crawl
and stand - again, maybe
this is all, more
than just evolutionary design
maybe, we were gifted
a physical metaphor
for our survival of life: right
from the start...

July 1st, 2021 03:19

Breathlessness
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be there for you Amy.

Andy

June 30th, 2021 14:40

Senseless
Teddy.15 said:

The questions are answered because you are living them. Senseless? Definately not
This poem is beautiful. You are young and wise already but be patient there\'s a lot more to come.

June 18th, 2021 00:21

Senseless
ShnMchlStoops76 said:

Wonderful poem. You cannot learn how to live your life without questions, questions, and more questions. Without questions how do you know if your happy?

June 17th, 2021 17:04

Senseless
Goldfinch60 said:

We all need to ask questions in our lives and one day they will be answered in the correct way and life will be so much better.

Andy

June 17th, 2021 15:18

Senseless
Neil Higgins said:

Lovely words Amy.
Keep marching on

June 17th, 2021 08:32

Mindless
L. B. Mek said:

keep searching, long enough
and you\'ll soon be writing
those same answers: you\'re questing;
for they all exist, within you
it just needs time
to filter out all that futile doubt, of distraction
to begin, hearing: your own truth,
the real one!
you\'ll be ale to tell the difference
when you get there
because then, all that clutter in your life
will simply, step aside
and clarity, will be yours to utilise: indefinitely!
(that, or you\'ll be so tired
you\'ll gain a good nights rest
either way, introspection
is a worthwhile endeavour, I suggest) lol..
thanks for sharing a wonderful read
thought provoking to say the least

June 17th, 2021 05:13

Mindless
Goldfinch60 said:

That writing will forever help in releasing you into a wonderful life Amy.

Andy

June 17th, 2021 00:45

Mindless
Doggerel Dave said:

Deep existential questions there. That you are questioning is more than a good start.
You have the time - you\'ll get there.

June 16th, 2021 19:38

Mindless
dusk arising said:

Just keep writing your own and reading other peoples poetry on here. You\'ll find that relating to other peoples problems in their poetry will help you find your own answers. It works like that for so many poets.

June 16th, 2021 13:23

Nameless
Goldfinch60 said:

Things do change in life and I am sure that the wonder of life is with you each day you arise from your bed as it does with me.

Andy

June 16th, 2021 00:16

Nameless
dusk arising said:

All around us is newborn life and death. You have to work out where you are in the middle of it i guess.
While you are still alive, be alive and live as much as you can. Dream of a good thing to come.

June 15th, 2021 14:03

The Colorful Fog
Goldfinch60 said:

Our Spirits may meet in time.

April 18th, 2021 00:48

The Colorful Fog
Teddy.15 said:

I love your title it really has a wonderful vision, I like your topic, I don\'t suppose anyone escapes those grey moments however if we are positive then those grey moments pass. Your last lines are powerful.

April 17th, 2021 10:39

Love
L. B. Mek said:

ownership of self, in the face of fate: worded so accessibly
a good read

February 23rd, 2021 04:36

Love
Goldfinch60 said:

May that home be forever filled with love and peace.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:57

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