Comments received on poems by Celestial Amy



My Dreams
yellowrose said:

Very expressive . Great way with words ) everyone wants a life free of fear

October 4th, 2021 15:21

My Dreams
L. B. Mek said:

a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
keep Believing!
(may I recommend you try out
\'simple things\' a song by teddy swims
the chorus lyrics are:
\'It\'s the sound of the rain
Coming down, when you fall asleep
It\'s a call from a friend
That you love, but never get to see
All the time, you can waste
Tryna chase, what you\'ll never need
Hope you come, back around:
to simple things\'

September 28th, 2021 03:52

My Dreams
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words Amy but that light is there for you.

Andy

September 28th, 2021 00:28

My Dreams
Trenz Pruca said:

Heart rendering but with a dollop of hope. Thank you. I enjoyed it a lot.

September 27th, 2021 17:30

In The Darkness Of The Light
yellowrose said:

I really like this .., some great words ‘it’s a beautiful read 🙂

September 17th, 2021 12:49

A Soul
L. B. Mek said:

we all need an escape, thankfully it seems you have the ability to write and shed some of your burdens that way, so many
can only repress and watch their anxieties and frustrations, fester and consume them from within..
(we lucky few, must be grateful for the small mercy\'s we\'ve being granted in life..)
thanks for sharing

September 16th, 2021 04:22

A Soul
Fozzy said:

Why cant our souls touch ? I love that

September 15th, 2021 15:47

The Dull Blade
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully versed,
best art comes out of heartbreak
thanks for sharing

August 27th, 2021 03:07

The Seed
Goldfinch60 said:

Emotive words with a positive ending Amy, you must keep moving forward because a wonderful life awaits you.

Andy

August 9th, 2021 00:23

The Seed
The elder poet said:

This is a well written poem . But not of a bright future for your world. But still hope for your single seed. I really liked it.


August 8th, 2021 10:46

The End
Thekkinkkattil said:

Strong feelings of anger.Poetry is a means to vent it .keep it up

August 6th, 2021 20:37

Just Me
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing read
from a passionate wordsmith,
thanks for sharing

July 15th, 2021 03:30

Just Me
peto said:

Wow
You sound pissed off and let down in this
Brilliantly conveyed
An amazing read from the second you devoured the knife
Will be looking at more from you
Superb

July 14th, 2021 15:03

Anger
aDarkerMind said:

a write of true heartache Amy, fuelled on pain.
a true work of art none the less.

July 11th, 2021 13:50

Rejection Perfection
Goldfinch60 said:

Beneath that metal the love within you exists and it will break through and make your life wonderful and full of love for both yourself and all around you.

Andy

July 7th, 2021 00:55

Rejection Perfection
Having hope said:

Good words 🙂

July 6th, 2021 09:19

Incomplete
L. B. Mek said:

still alive and through your words
shining bright! in that forest of night
there is a resurgence of spirit
even in the pain you depict
like Shakespeare clarified
there is a sweetness
to our parting of sorrow,
and its with that tenderness
your poems resonates,
an unyielding defiance:
\'I want to run
Barefeet through the stream
With a group of people
Whom I all love

Let it all repeat
No words enough anymore
To describe my desire\'
\'Close your eyes
Can´t you see?
\'I am still alive
After all\'
(what a beautiful read
thank you for sharing, dear poet)

July 6th, 2021 02:31

Incomplete
Goldfinch60 said:

Stay alive Amy your life is ahead of you and it will be wonderful.

Andy

July 6th, 2021 01:03

Freedom, A Kingdom
L. B. Mek said:

fortunately its summer, around my way
but I recognise
the clouds in the sky\'s: of your words
and I relate
truly, seemingly - we\'re all just a verse
or a stanza
from belated realisation\'s, blinked
change
to our perspective\'s: brighter horizons...
thanks for sharing, such a wonderful read

July 5th, 2021 06:05

Freedom, A Kingdom
flyingfish said:

Recall John Lennon. I enjoyed it. Cheers,

July 4th, 2021 18:04

The Last String
MendedFences27 said:

A beautiful description of chasing youthful dreams, while at the same time divulging growing impatience. If it\'s real it is worth waiting, if not set it free. The future is always far off, but in reality life is very short. Sometimes in life one comes to a crossroad and must choose, if traveling with another both face a decision. Choose wisely. Seven years seems a long time to wait.
You have expressed all of this in a short and concise format, Your word choices are unique, colorful, clever, and thought provoking. Especially enjoyed your vision of \"Wisdom\" and your entire seventh stanza, from \"I want to see\" to \"invites warmth inside.\" - Phil A.

July 3rd, 2021 18:29

May Flowers
rebmasters said:

I particularly enjoyed these evocative lines:

\"The blazing sun high above
It burns my skin

Red just may become my favorite color\"

A beautiful narrative journey weaved within your words

July 2nd, 2021 10:40

April Showers
yellowrose said:

Good poem )

July 2nd, 2021 10:18

May Flowers
yellowrose said:

A good read ) nice choice of words

July 2nd, 2021 10:16

April Showers
Goldfinch60 said:

That path before you will take you into the glory of your life, just take that first step and all will be wonderful.

Andy

July 2nd, 2021 00:22

Breathlessness
L. B. Mek said:

intriguing, reads like notes
on a journey of introspection..
still, first we learn to crawl
then stand - then quickly fall
then crawl
and stand - again, maybe
this is all, more
than just evolutionary design
maybe, we were gifted
a physical metaphor
for our survival of life: right
from the start...

July 1st, 2021 03:19

Breathlessness
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be there for you Amy.

Andy

June 30th, 2021 14:40

Senseless
Teddy.15 said:

The questions are answered because you are living them. Senseless? Definately not
This poem is beautiful. You are young and wise already but be patient there\'s a lot more to come.

June 18th, 2021 00:21

Senseless
ShnMchlStoops76 said:

Wonderful poem. You cannot learn how to live your life without questions, questions, and more questions. Without questions how do you know if your happy?

June 17th, 2021 17:04

Senseless
Goldfinch60 said:

We all need to ask questions in our lives and one day they will be answered in the correct way and life will be so much better.

Andy

June 17th, 2021 15:18

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