Comments received on poems by marymoon
The boat in the harbour.
L. B. Mek said:
you took me on a journey as stormy and rewarding as Melville, though mercifully utilising a much more digestible \'stream\' of words, and not that Leviathan \'Ocean\' he subjected us to traverse,
good read
December 1st, 2020 05:06
L. B. Mek said:
you took me on a journey as stormy and rewarding as Melville, though mercifully utilising a much more digestible \'stream\' of words, and not that Leviathan \'Ocean\' he subjected us to traverse,
good read
December 1st, 2020 05:06
The boat in the harbour.
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Mary, the vagaries of the sea can change so quickly but the chains will hold your lives together in harmony.
Welcome to MPS.
December 1st, 2020 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Mary, the vagaries of the sea can change so quickly but the chains will hold your lives together in harmony.
Welcome to MPS.
December 1st, 2020 01:41
The boat in the harbour.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening MARY welcome to MPS ! It is a proactive site and functions by reading & commenting on each other poems ~ OK Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Thanks for your first Poem - about the Problems faced by Sailors on the Open Sea and an analogy with the the traumas faced in every day life. Brian & I enjoy Sailing and we agree ! We live in very perilous times and we are never really safe until we are anchored in the harbour ! Thanks for sharing an excellent Poem which pulsates with Rhyme & the Rhythm of the Sea ~ more please !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 16:17
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening MARY welcome to MPS ! It is a proactive site and functions by reading & commenting on each other poems ~ OK Please check our site ~ Thanks A & B.
Thanks for your first Poem - about the Problems faced by Sailors on the Open Sea and an analogy with the the traumas faced in every day life. Brian & I enjoy Sailing and we agree ! We live in very perilous times and we are never really safe until we are anchored in the harbour ! Thanks for sharing an excellent Poem which pulsates with Rhyme & the Rhythm of the Sea ~ more please !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 30th, 2020 16:17
