Comments received on poems by Alzbeta
On my birthday
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes your own thoughts can take you to that place where peace and harmony can be with you.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes your own thoughts can take you to that place where peace and harmony can be with you.
Andy
December 11th, 2020 01:45
Christmas wish 2020
L. B. Mek said:
reads wonderfully wholesome, but has me wondering if I\'ve missed something since it\'s age restricted?
hope you have a safe and relaxing final few weeks to what\'s been a testing 2020
December 10th, 2020 04:58
L. B. Mek said:
reads wonderfully wholesome, but has me wondering if I\'ve missed something since it\'s age restricted?
hope you have a safe and relaxing final few weeks to what\'s been a testing 2020
December 10th, 2020 04:58
Christmas wish 2020
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Alzbeta, may your words come true in all our lives, I am sure that they will.
Welcome to MPS.
December 10th, 2020 02:22
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful positive write Alzbeta, may your words come true in all our lives, I am sure that they will.
Welcome to MPS.
December 10th, 2020 02:22
Christmas wish 2020
MelissaJA said:
Laughter is the best medicine. Great poem.
December 9th, 2020 23:02
MelissaJA said:
Laughter is the best medicine. Great poem.
December 9th, 2020 23:02
Christmas wish 2020
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Good Evening HUGI - welcome to MPS it is a proactive site in which we read and comment on each others Poems ! Please visit our site - Thanks A & B !
Thank you for your first Poem - Excellent ! Four balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhythm & Rhyme pattern ! MORE PLEASE ! One minor point at the end of Line 5 Gramatically & Rhymewise *can* should be *cans* - OK.
I love the subject of the Poem and the fact that it was for a Friend ! It strikes a very positive note in a *COVID stressed* Christmas ~ Thanks
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 9th, 2020 16:13
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here ~ Good Evening HUGI - welcome to MPS it is a proactive site in which we read and comment on each others Poems ! Please visit our site - Thanks A & B !
Thank you for your first Poem - Excellent ! Four balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhythm & Rhyme pattern ! MORE PLEASE ! One minor point at the end of Line 5 Gramatically & Rhymewise *can* should be *cans* - OK.
I love the subject of the Poem and the fact that it was for a Friend ! It strikes a very positive note in a *COVID stressed* Christmas ~ Thanks
Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian & Smokey Cat ! ! !
December 9th, 2020 16:13
