Comments received on poems by shylagreen



from your most worn pair of shoes
orchidee said:

Good write Shyla. Is the idea here of a pair of shoes talking to their wearer? That\'s how I see it.
Meanwhile - I walked miles in a new pair of shoes. Both me big toes have turned black-ish and swollen. Never happened before.
I have to tape up (plasters) me big toes before wearing them shoes now. This started 2 weeks ago, but slowly healing. Bruised me toe-nails I reckon.

December 15th, 2020 14:40

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Goldfinch60 said:

Good words shyla.

Welcome to MPS.

December 13th, 2020 02:21

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ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening SHYLA thanks for your first POEM. You will find MPS is a proactive in which we read & comment on each others Poems. Thanks for your first poem an elegant concept and I love some of the *lesser known* words you use. This adds to the quality of the Poem !
In this life we all meet people who shine like Lotus Blossom in a sea of mud ! Yes they are all *Pleasing to the eye* people who themselves have had *A change of Heart* & follow the teachings of Orpheus ! Such People draw us wittingly (or unwittingly) into the *Beginnings of Love* ! My exerience of Brian (who I married in March) was like this ! WE met at a rather low key Dance & Social - at the Hospital where I work and (compared with the other Men) He did shine like a Lotus Blossom ~ AMEN ! Please visit out site ~ Thanks

Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian ! !

December 12th, 2020 18:31

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FredPeyer said:

welcome to MPS shyla!
Very well written. Had to look up the meaning of some of the words you used. Well done!

December 12th, 2020 14:55