Comments received on poems by shivashiv

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shivashiv said:

This poem is just a feeling and enthusiasm based, I\'m not a pro writer even this is my first poem.. but i would take care of instruction and try to reduce the problem of wording..
Positive thing for me is some people is noticing the correction, and that could help me to write correctly.
Thank you very much for your help and support.

December 23rd, 2020 20:08

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Robert Southwick Richmond said:

Answered a question - I see that MyPoeticSide (which is a WordPress site) supports Devanāgarī. I\'ve gotten it to display Farsi and pointed Hebrew in a couple of poems. Must have very good Unicode support.

Tell us how the verse works. I can\'t read Devanāgarī, but I can see that lines rime, and riming lines are approximately the same length.

I know that much of the Bhagavad-Gītā is in trochaic tetrameter (the meter of Longfellow\'s Hiawatha).

December 23rd, 2020 15:12

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Goldfinch60 said:

May that dream be fulfilled and all be successful in your life.

Welcome to MPS.

December 23rd, 2020 01:26

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dusk arising said:

džɀɇʬͱͼ ˧ЖЮϧњ șѾЎф Ѯӄ

December 22nd, 2020 10:45

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orchidee said:

Me laptop helped me out. A message appeared \'Translate?\'. I clicked Yes - and - bingo!
Or try the old right-click button.
Good write S.

December 22nd, 2020 07:25