Comments received on poems by starman74
BEAUTY AND MUSIC
L. B. Mek said:
\'Her pale body near translucent made so by the moon\',
wonderfully unique and vivid imagery you\'ve utilised throughout your write, a really enjoyable read,
thanks for sharing
January 11th, 2021 06:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Her pale body near translucent made so by the moon\',
wonderfully unique and vivid imagery you\'ve utilised throughout your write, a really enjoyable read,
thanks for sharing
January 11th, 2021 06:46
BEAUTY AND MUSIC
starman74 said:
Thank you Andy you summed it up perfectly. Glad you enjoyed it.
January 11th, 2021 03:27
starman74 said:
Thank you Andy you summed it up perfectly. Glad you enjoyed it.
January 11th, 2021 03:27
BEAUTY AND MUSIC
starman74 said:
Thanks for pointing out the mistake I made with lay Robert I will correct that Cheers. Going to leave the poem as it is it fell that way and I’m not to big on structure. Cheers
January 11th, 2021 03:24
starman74 said:
Thanks for pointing out the mistake I made with lay Robert I will correct that Cheers. Going to leave the poem as it is it fell that way and I’m not to big on structure. Cheers
January 11th, 2021 03:24
BEAUTY AND MUSIC
Goldfinch60 said:
The two glories of wonder, music and love, within your words make it so wonderful.
Andy
January 11th, 2021 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
The two glories of wonder, music and love, within your words make it so wonderful.
Andy
January 11th, 2021 01:15
BEAUTY AND MUSIC
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Because of the fairly formal diction of this poem, I\'ll note line 4: should be moved (tense of the other verbs in the poem).
The past tense of lie (\'recline\") is lay.
January 10th, 2021 15:57
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
Because of the fairly formal diction of this poem, I\'ll note line 4: should be moved (tense of the other verbs in the poem).
The past tense of lie (\'recline\") is lay.
January 10th, 2021 15:57
A PLEA
starman74 said:
It’s hard but as you say time is the best healer. Thanks for your kind words.
January 9th, 2021 10:49
starman74 said:
It’s hard but as you say time is the best healer. Thanks for your kind words.
January 9th, 2021 10:49