Comments received on poems by starman74



THE COST OF SILENCE
starman74 said:

Thanks john. That very kind of you.

January 17th, 2021 15:53

THE COST OF SILENCE
starman74 said:

Thanks Sam. Much appreciated

January 17th, 2021 15:52

THE COST OF SILENCE
John Prophet said:

Tough times great writer!

January 14th, 2021 06:50

BEAUTY AND MUSIC
L. B. Mek said:

\'Her pale body near translucent made so by the moon\',
wonderfully unique and vivid imagery you\'ve utilised throughout your write, a really enjoyable read,
thanks for sharing

January 11th, 2021 06:46

BEAUTY AND MUSIC
starman74 said:

Thank you Andy you summed it up perfectly. Glad you enjoyed it.

January 11th, 2021 03:27

BEAUTY AND MUSIC
starman74 said:

Thanks for pointing out the mistake I made with lay Robert I will correct that Cheers. Going to leave the poem as it is it fell that way and I’m not to big on structure. Cheers

January 11th, 2021 03:24

BEAUTY AND MUSIC
Goldfinch60 said:

The two glories of wonder, music and love, within your words make it so wonderful.

Andy

January 11th, 2021 01:15

BEAUTY AND MUSIC
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

Because of the fairly formal diction of this poem, I\'ll note line 4: should be moved (tense of the other verbs in the poem).

The past tense of lie (\'recline\") is lay.

January 10th, 2021 15:57

A PLEA
starman74 said:

Thanks Ron I hope you’re right.

January 9th, 2021 11:39

A PLEA
ron parrish aka wordman said:

whats real never leaves

January 9th, 2021 11:23

A PLEA
starman74 said:

It’s hard but as you say time is the best healer. Thanks for your kind words.

January 9th, 2021 10:49

No Burden
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

Welcome to MPS.

January 9th, 2021 01:29