Comments received on poems by davefmus



A Simple Life
FredPeyer said:

Well done Davefmus. Even feels a bit like a country song.

January 16th, 2021 14:03

A Simple Life
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good read Dave.

January 16th, 2021 12:25

A Simple Life
Michael Edwards said:

Drawn in by it - great read.

January 16th, 2021 11:02

A Simple Life
Doggerel Dave said:

Takes me through to the end with little effort. Easy pleasant read - thanks.
Great rhythm which tells a simple but recognisable tale.

Regards Dave (No.1) :-)

January 16th, 2021 05:03

A Simple Life
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive words Dave.

Andy

January 16th, 2021 03:21

A Simple Life
orchidee said:

Good write Dave.

January 16th, 2021 03:18

In My Mind
davefmus said:

thanks Andy, my sympathies on the loss of your lady

January 16th, 2021 02:50

In My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Dave, your two hearts will always remain united as mine and my wife, now passed on, will always remain united.

Andy

January 16th, 2021 01:47

In My Mind
Doggerel Dave said:

Robert - read his first one, Fate?
Glad you did obtain The Ode Less....


January 15th, 2021 22:58

In My Mind
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

You know how to write a line of poetry, though your verse doesn\'t actually adhere to any traditional form.

January 15th, 2021 20:18

In My Mind
Jerry Reynolds said:

Memories can be sweet. Nice read Dave.

January 15th, 2021 17:26

In My Mind
orchidee said:

Good write Dave.

January 15th, 2021 14:36

Fate
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully versed,
has a light-hearted singsong feel
while noting some insightful commentary on those rollercoaster elements within life,
thanks for sharing

January 15th, 2021 05:58

Fate
Doggerel Dave said:

Accomplished. Who are you davefmus?
Welcome to MPS ( I wuz first! :-) )
Site is quite interactive as you will find if you care to explore.
Anyway, good luck
Dave

January 15th, 2021 00:14