Comments received on poems by davefmus
A Simple Life
FredPeyer said:
Well done Davefmus. Even feels a bit like a country song.
January 16th, 2021 14:03
FredPeyer said:
Well done Davefmus. Even feels a bit like a country song.
January 16th, 2021 14:03
A Simple Life
Doggerel Dave said:
Takes me through to the end with little effort. Easy pleasant read - thanks.
Great rhythm which tells a simple but recognisable tale.
Regards Dave (No.1) :-)
January 16th, 2021 05:03
Doggerel Dave said:
Takes me through to the end with little effort. Easy pleasant read - thanks.
Great rhythm which tells a simple but recognisable tale.
Regards Dave (No.1) :-)
January 16th, 2021 05:03
In My Mind
davefmus said:
thanks Andy, my sympathies on the loss of your lady
January 16th, 2021 02:50
davefmus said:
thanks Andy, my sympathies on the loss of your lady
January 16th, 2021 02:50
In My Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dave, your two hearts will always remain united as mine and my wife, now passed on, will always remain united.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Dave, your two hearts will always remain united as mine and my wife, now passed on, will always remain united.
Andy
January 16th, 2021 01:47
In My Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
Robert - read his first one, Fate?
Glad you did obtain The Ode Less....
January 15th, 2021 22:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Robert - read his first one, Fate?
Glad you did obtain The Ode Less....
January 15th, 2021 22:58
In My Mind
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
You know how to write a line of poetry, though your verse doesn\'t actually adhere to any traditional form.
January 15th, 2021 20:18
Robert Southwick Richmond said:
You know how to write a line of poetry, though your verse doesn\'t actually adhere to any traditional form.
January 15th, 2021 20:18
Fate
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully versed,
has a light-hearted singsong feel
while noting some insightful commentary on those rollercoaster elements within life,
thanks for sharing
January 15th, 2021 05:58
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully versed,
has a light-hearted singsong feel
while noting some insightful commentary on those rollercoaster elements within life,
thanks for sharing
January 15th, 2021 05:58
Fate
Doggerel Dave said:
Accomplished. Who are you davefmus?
Welcome to MPS ( I wuz first! :-) )
Site is quite interactive as you will find if you care to explore.
Anyway, good luck
Dave
January 15th, 2021 00:14
Doggerel Dave said:
Accomplished. Who are you davefmus?
Welcome to MPS ( I wuz first! :-) )
Site is quite interactive as you will find if you care to explore.
Anyway, good luck
Dave
January 15th, 2021 00:14