Oceanum
L. B. Mek said:

\'Steal away - to Oceans forged
From dregs of memories
Them - cast - by frail hands
Turned ironclad by faith
This becomes the force that binds
The paltry substance - Life
To fickle souls like mine
The Oceans mantle - swallows us
In jaws of likely fate
We amble down its swelling maw
A century away\'
what a beautifully worded write!
somewhat epic in scope, but how well you\'ve executed your poetic vision and still managed to distil your message so accessibly relatable,
thanks for sharing dear poet


February 19th, 2021 05:41

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L. B. Mek said:

stayed true to the voice throughout, a wonderful tempo as well,
good read

January 26th, 2021 05:29

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FredPeyer said:

I don\'t know if you wrote this from experience or imagination, either way, it is beautiful.

January 25th, 2021 20:12

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Goldfinch60 said:

We must always move on in our life not matter what trials are put in our way.

Welcome to MPS.

January 22nd, 2021 01:59

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Julie B said:

Absolutely .... Its meaningful .. It grips you ! ...

January 21st, 2021 16:54