Comments received on poems by oldmat



Rooms
oldmat said:

Thankyou for these lovely words. Also the kind welcome .

January 28th, 2021 02:22

Rooms
Goldfinch60 said:

We each have rooms in our lives but we also have doors not yet opened and as we go into those rooms our life expands into more joy and love.

Welcome to MPS.

January 28th, 2021 01:30

Rooms
Doggerel Dave said:

Contribution from a pedant:
\'On too the future\' - try \'On to the future\' for size. \'time to read\'?
Interesting rooms.
Me too - I second the \'Welcome to MPS\' motion above.


January 27th, 2021 18:34

Rooms
Bragee said:

I join the others in saying I’m
No teacher. However I enjoyed the read

January 27th, 2021 11:36

Rooms
orchidee said:

I\'m no professional poet either.
Good write oldmat. Yes, maybe break up some of the lines to be shorter lines.

January 27th, 2021 11:35

Rooms
FredPeyer said:

Welcome to MPS, oldmat! I like the reference to \'rooms\'. Sometimes I feel as if I am living in just one big room where everything goes on at the same time!

January 27th, 2021 11:20

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Jerry Reynolds said:

Not qualified to teach, treat or critique you.
Enjoyed your poem. You might try breaking the
Lines at pain – present and empty.


January 27th, 2021 10:08