Comments received on poems by Jordan
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Are you using \"I am..,\" instead of \"I want to be, I will be, I\'m going to be, If only I could be\" etc.etc?
July 10th, 2024 02:14
Mutley Ravishes said:
Are you using \"I am..,\" instead of \"I want to be, I will be, I\'m going to be, If only I could be\" etc.etc?
July 10th, 2024 02:14
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Mutley Ravishes said:
Jordan, you wrote a poem called \"Imagination.\" What if it can be awakened?! In other words, taken beyond the level of fantasy, and into reality?
July 9th, 2024 18:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Jordan, you wrote a poem called \"Imagination.\" What if it can be awakened?! In other words, taken beyond the level of fantasy, and into reality?
July 9th, 2024 18:43
Searching
L. B. Mek said:
relatable, I like your sparse wording
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:00
L. B. Mek said:
relatable, I like your sparse wording
thanks for sharing
May 29th, 2023 03:00
Help Is On The Way
L. B. Mek said:
really like the self fulfilling
confidence
more power to your dreams
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:40
L. B. Mek said:
really like the self fulfilling
confidence
more power to your dreams
thanks for sharing
May 8th, 2023 05:40
Help
Bobby O said:
Nice verse , may I say that that motion and energy in this piece makes me guess deep down you may still have a slight attachment to that life?
May 5th, 2023 16:43
Bobby O said:
Nice verse , may I say that that motion and energy in this piece makes me guess deep down you may still have a slight attachment to that life?
May 5th, 2023 16:43
Imagination
L. B. Mek said:
relatable, and yet - worded so succinct, a remarkable fit of wordsmith subtlety
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
relatable, and yet - worded so succinct, a remarkable fit of wordsmith subtlety
thanks for sharing
April 29th, 2021 05:09
Imagination
Goldfinch60 said:
I can fully understand where you are coming from Jordan.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I can fully understand where you are coming from Jordan.
Andy
April 29th, 2021 01:07
Imagination
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify very much with those five short sharp lines. Thank you very much, Jordan. A favourite.
(Differences in language, culture or....? I would read the last line as \'I will be just fine\')
April 28th, 2021 21:05
Doggerel Dave said:
I identify very much with those five short sharp lines. Thank you very much, Jordan. A favourite.
(Differences in language, culture or....? I would read the last line as \'I will be just fine\')
April 28th, 2021 21:05
Letter To God
Goldfinch60 said:
That book will bring so many good memories when you are older Jordan, please do not burn it yet.
Andy
April 28th, 2021 00:44
Goldfinch60 said:
That book will bring so many good memories when you are older Jordan, please do not burn it yet.
Andy
April 28th, 2021 00:44
Walking In The Park
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a soothing element to your words, a sense of interconnection between our chosen environments and their eventual symbolic metamorphosis in our lives,
connecting us to our searched-out reservoir\'s of solace and motivation..
glad you found yours, thanks for sharing a wonderful read
March 8th, 2021 05:23
L. B. Mek said:
there\'s a soothing element to your words, a sense of interconnection between our chosen environments and their eventual symbolic metamorphosis in our lives,
connecting us to our searched-out reservoir\'s of solace and motivation..
glad you found yours, thanks for sharing a wonderful read
March 8th, 2021 05:23
Walking In The Park
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times people walking in the park have become much more friendly.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
In these Strange Times people walking in the park have become much more friendly.
Andy
March 8th, 2021 01:35
How I Feel
Olivia. said:
Interesting! I really great to express how you feel. X
March 7th, 2021 12:54
Olivia. said:
Interesting! I really great to express how you feel. X
March 7th, 2021 12:54
How I Feel
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength will take you to a better life in time Jorden.
Welcome to MPS.
March 7th, 2021 02:32
Goldfinch60 said:
That strength will take you to a better life in time Jorden.
Welcome to MPS.
March 7th, 2021 02:32
