Left Behind in Hell
L. B. Mek said:

Maybe, there are elements of the dark but the more I read, all I could feel was words of confronted pain transmuted within poetic intent, into lines of insightful patience and empathetic understanding.
Condolences for your loss, truly - I can\'t begin to imagine what you\'re going through, but I laud your willingness to still reach-out to the world and even braver: choose to share a drop of wisdom, trying to commune some words of solace, with others who may have experienced something similar, attempting to introduce a semblance of that divine saving grace, you excavated from those deep reservoirs in your heart.
A great write!
Thank you for sharing dear poet, keep believing: one unstable step at a time

February 18th, 2021 03:52

Left Behind in Hell
orchidee said:

A dark place. Hope light comes into it, if gradually.

February 17th, 2021 03:04

Left Behind in Hell
dusk arising said:

Here on MPS we are the safety valve for torn emotions. Inner turmoil needs expression and here, together, we are a collective of souls recovering from life experiences.

A word of caution. Beware of the dark audacious poet (often claiming to be absent) who has a history of treating MPS as his personal introduction agency when he spots a lady who may be susceptible to his wiley ways.

February 17th, 2021 00:37

Swelling Within Me
orchidee said:

I can\'t help shuddering at this. Not the quality of the poem (lol) but what\'s going on in it. I\'ve heard a true story or two about it.
Surely pains, or some pains, of human life, are less than this. But you want it all to \'go away\' by getting out the blade.

February 3rd, 2021 02:58