Comments received on poems by Makoto Maruyama
The apple redeemed by blood
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
I\'m sure I\'m incapable of grasping the many nuances
you\'ve weaved so intricately within your delectable lyrics,
but from what I have been able to comprehend
I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed..
\'arigato gozaimasu\' dear poet
May 4th, 2021 06:30
L. B. Mek said:
a great read!
I\'m sure I\'m incapable of grasping the many nuances
you\'ve weaved so intricately within your delectable lyrics,
but from what I have been able to comprehend
I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed..
\'arigato gozaimasu\' dear poet
May 4th, 2021 06:30
Sleep slower than machine gun
Doggerel Dave said:
Totally beyond my comprehension/understanding, Makoto - I think the penultimate stanza may have something....I really would like to know what you mean...
Thanks for posting it up here - it gives food for thought.
April 29th, 2021 04:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Totally beyond my comprehension/understanding, Makoto - I think the penultimate stanza may have something....I really would like to know what you mean...
Thanks for posting it up here - it gives food for thought.
April 29th, 2021 04:47
Mad Tea-Party
L. B. Mek said:
definitely a fun read, thanks for the smiles
a fitting tribute
April 26th, 2021 05:24
L. B. Mek said:
definitely a fun read, thanks for the smiles
a fitting tribute
April 26th, 2021 05:24
Mad Tea-Party
Doggerel Dave said:
Great imaginative write, but the Darjeeling surely should be given more that two minutes. Anyway someone was on something much stronger than that.... :-)
April 25th, 2021 06:47
Doggerel Dave said:
Great imaginative write, but the Darjeeling surely should be given more that two minutes. Anyway someone was on something much stronger than that.... :-)
April 25th, 2021 06:47
All of the world will turn black like a rotting apple
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful write, detailed in its explicit scope to penetrate our duality of innate sensibilities..
but dear poet, the ying and yang of life
is not limited to a concept
where white is all-good
and black is all-bad
true, what\'s rotten will indeed - sicken
but not all darkness
represents our doorway to a closed path
better, I feel - to simply accept
that blackness we all harbour
and confront - it, before
our ignorance, feeds - it
and we are reduced to mere contaminated carriers
of that same plague
we point out - dutifully: in others
while mirroring, their very actions...
April 20th, 2021 04:45
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful write, detailed in its explicit scope to penetrate our duality of innate sensibilities..
but dear poet, the ying and yang of life
is not limited to a concept
where white is all-good
and black is all-bad
true, what\'s rotten will indeed - sicken
but not all darkness
represents our doorway to a closed path
better, I feel - to simply accept
that blackness we all harbour
and confront - it, before
our ignorance, feeds - it
and we are reduced to mere contaminated carriers
of that same plague
we point out - dutifully: in others
while mirroring, their very actions...
April 20th, 2021 04:45
You are not a Slave
Doggerel Dave said:
To me this is two separate poems - the first I can relate to: the second, now while I\'ve experienced some fairly extreme environments, never anything halfway as excessive as that.Thus I find it hard to connect with.
Interesting write though, Makoto.
April 18th, 2021 19:48
Doggerel Dave said:
To me this is two separate poems - the first I can relate to: the second, now while I\'ve experienced some fairly extreme environments, never anything halfway as excessive as that.Thus I find it hard to connect with.
Interesting write though, Makoto.
April 18th, 2021 19:48
La Danse Macabre
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are always within us Makoto.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 02:19
Goldfinch60 said:
Those memories are always within us Makoto.
Andy
April 5th, 2021 02:19
Great Journey
Goldfinch60 said:
Each step on your journey will bring you to a new place of wonder Makoto.
Welcome to MPS.
April 5th, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Each step on your journey will bring you to a new place of wonder Makoto.
Welcome to MPS.
April 5th, 2021 00:26
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