Comments received on poems by Liam Power



Chosen
L. B. Mek said:

sumptuously subtle in delivery and flow
with endless depths of perfectly attuned, relatability
wonderful artistry, words as refreshing
as the picture you paired them with

May 14th, 2021 05:52

Chosen
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

May 14th, 2021 01:35

A Decision re: grad school
L. B. Mek said:

\'She simply pointed
with her questions\'
*while snapping away - at yearning\'s frame, stilled - time*
\'I will go to France
to Toulouse where I will
lose\'
*to shed this unrequited - state, free myself
and find, a new muse - to life: for me*
(forgive me for borrowing your beautiful words and rudely interpreting them, to inspire my own feeble creativity)
stay safe dear youthful poet and hope you have a great time
jump on a train and visit our dear little blighty, when you\'re free
stay clear of London
and you\'re sure to have a memorable time, I guarantee

April 29th, 2021 04:57

A Decision re: grad school
Doggerel Dave said:

You will be following the great tradition of the Grand Tour, where you will imbibe great cultural ideas and perspectives. So absorb it all.....and please be a good boy scout... :-)
Good luck.

April 29th, 2021 01:13

A Decision re: grad school
Goldfinch60 said:

Enjoy your trip to France Liam, my granddaughter lives and works in France.

Andy

April 29th, 2021 00:50

Swimming at Lahinch
Goldfinch60 said:

May those wonderful moments stay with you all the time Liam.

Andy

April 28th, 2021 00:25

Swimming at Lahinch
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 27th, 2021 05:53

Swimming at Lahinch
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful flow and tone, a wonderfully subtle read
thanks for sharing

April 27th, 2021 05:12

#63 The Painter\'s Sky
L. B. Mek said:

\'yup that aching, for that next symphonic season
of fervent inking - a minute
from when that keyboard, ceased dancing\'..
a wonderful read

April 22nd, 2021 05:16

#63 The Painter\'s Sky
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 22nd, 2021 01:30

#63 The Painter\'s Sky
Goldfinch60 said:

The artist creates such wonderful images in Nature\'s Realm.

Andy

April 22nd, 2021 00:40

#61 A Haiku in Time
Goldfinch60 said:

That time with family is so important and must not be missed.

Andy

April 21st, 2021 01:12

#61 A Haiku in Time
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 20th, 2021 13:00

#60 After Frankl
L. B. Mek said:

before proclaiming, I find it best
to find a context
to my knowledge and experience of the word: suffering,
then attribute the level I invest into my laments: accordingly
that way, I need not be reprimanded by fate
when true suffering, passes me - by
with a vibrant smile plastered, on its: flag of defiance...

April 20th, 2021 05:19

#60 After Frankl
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 20th, 2021 01:49

#60 After Frankl
yellowrose said:

I wander ... why some people have to suffer so much / be in sadness when itโ€™s our right to be jn a place of joy and peace ...

Some people say it helps you grow ....and become a stronger person

April 20th, 2021 01:05

#60 After Frankl
Goldfinch60 said:

True words Liam.

Andy

April 20th, 2021 00:29

#59 Cliff Jumping
L. B. Mek said:

\'They know this task is a question
asked of you, by you.\'
profound!

April 19th, 2021 03:54

#59 Cliff Jumping
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.
Too late to change our minds, once we\'ve stepped off the cliff edge and dived in.

April 18th, 2021 01:44

#59 Cliff Jumping
Doggerel Dave said:

Got that experientially - the challenge to yourself, the fear, your watching friends, the relief - felt it all. Nice neat write.

April 17th, 2021 22:56

#58 The Sea Seeks the Truth
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 17th, 2021 02:10

#58 The Sea Seeks the Truth
Fay Slimm. said:

The image and wording flows together so well in this poetic view of the sea Liam - -- living alongside the power of its presence I can relate to each line of your engaging tribute.

April 17th, 2021 01:58

#58 The Sea Seeks the Truth
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good words Liam and so true.

Andy

April 17th, 2021 00:45

#58 The Sea Seeks the Truth
yellowrose said:

Lovely words ๐Ÿ™‚

April 17th, 2021 00:12

#57 The Red Sun
Bragee said:

Sounds very peaceful!

April 16th, 2021 10:53

#57 The Red Sun
orchidee said:

Good write Liam.

April 16th, 2021 02:04

#56 The Quiet Drive
L. B. Mek said:

really like the tone, stylistic - in its stripped-down delivery, yet still paints the mood and feel acutely
great read

April 15th, 2021 05:38

#56 The Quiet Drive
Goldfinch60 said:

Fine emotive words Liam.

Andy

April 15th, 2021 00:41

#56 The Quiet Drive
Bragee said:

Few words...powerful punch!
Love this

April 14th, 2021 19:26

The Dog is Out
jarcher54 said:

Goodness, yes. One does find oneself pawing and whimpering at the door, and that can be exciting and compelling... but sometimes you just want to lie on the porch and feel content to bask quietly in the sun.

April 10th, 2021 02:31

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