Comments received on poems by iAli
I\'m waiting
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
Nice write. Poem full of romantic words
August 19th, 2021 05:17
Pacifique Niyitanga said:
Nice write. Poem full of romantic words
August 19th, 2021 05:17
I\'m waiting
The elder poet said:
I hope your wait isn\'t long. I like your poem . Thanks for sharing it . You have a good evening.
August 13th, 2021 17:26
The elder poet said:
I hope your wait isn\'t long. I like your poem . Thanks for sharing it . You have a good evening.
August 13th, 2021 17:26
Trouble
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you not know there is “ no pain no gain\"?\'..
hummmm?
(Have you never heard of empathy, \'oh perfect\' being?
Do you not recognise, we\'re not all: made the same?
If you have perfected everything in your life, that\'s great!
Still, maybe you choose to word your impassioned message
in kindness - over judgement, and insure: it can become
a beacon of hope, than a chastising rhyme of indictment...)
thanks for sharing
July 13th, 2021 05:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'Do you not know there is “ no pain no gain\"?\'..
hummmm?
(Have you never heard of empathy, \'oh perfect\' being?
Do you not recognise, we\'re not all: made the same?
If you have perfected everything in your life, that\'s great!
Still, maybe you choose to word your impassioned message
in kindness - over judgement, and insure: it can become
a beacon of hope, than a chastising rhyme of indictment...)
thanks for sharing
July 13th, 2021 05:04
Trouble
Goldfinch60 said:
I always make the best of my life, I am a very positive person and see troubles as experience.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
I always make the best of my life, I am a very positive person and see troubles as experience.
Andy
July 13th, 2021 01:00
But
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressively wise in inviting the reader to look again at life\'s potential for those who are honest and want to learn more from nature -- I too love the reference to being not just one drop in the ocean but the entire ocean in a drop - well written Ali and look forward to reading more of your work.
July 6th, 2021 15:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Impressively wise in inviting the reader to look again at life\'s potential for those who are honest and want to learn more from nature -- I too love the reference to being not just one drop in the ocean but the entire ocean in a drop - well written Ali and look forward to reading more of your work.
July 6th, 2021 15:00
A Little
L. B. Mek said:
\'Knowing a little is very dangerous in life\'
knowing a little
is the best we can hope for: in life!
Not - knowing
that what, we will ever Know - is but a Fragment
of what there will Ever be: To know
is our Only mistake, in life...!
so knowing: is relative
while acknowledging our limitations
and accepting that Humility of Truth
is how we Recognise the Evil within Us
and Fight to Insure,
its Goodness we Allow to Posses us...
July 2nd, 2021 04:28
L. B. Mek said:
\'Knowing a little is very dangerous in life\'
knowing a little
is the best we can hope for: in life!
Not - knowing
that what, we will ever Know - is but a Fragment
of what there will Ever be: To know
is our Only mistake, in life...!
so knowing: is relative
while acknowledging our limitations
and accepting that Humility of Truth
is how we Recognise the Evil within Us
and Fight to Insure,
its Goodness we Allow to Posses us...
July 2nd, 2021 04:28
Inner Words
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality one day I Ali.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
May that dream become reality one day I Ali.
Andy
June 24th, 2021 00:47
Now
Clarita said:
Lovely message. A great reminder that the present must be lived to the fullest in the here and now, instead of continuing the never-ending cycle of recalling past experiences or overthinking the what-ifs of the future. Now is the time to act and be happy.
June 22nd, 2021 00:58
Clarita said:
Lovely message. A great reminder that the present must be lived to the fullest in the here and now, instead of continuing the never-ending cycle of recalling past experiences or overthinking the what-ifs of the future. Now is the time to act and be happy.
June 22nd, 2021 00:58
Now
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Super uplifting words that can motivate you and others. Thumbs up!.
Plz do read my poems too.
June 22nd, 2021 00:33
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Super uplifting words that can motivate you and others. Thumbs up!.
Plz do read my poems too.
June 22nd, 2021 00:33
Now
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is so precious I Ali, we must not waste a single one of them.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Each moment in our lives is so precious I Ali, we must not waste a single one of them.
Andy
June 22nd, 2021 00:11
The Ignorant Mind
Goldfinch60 said:
Ignorant fool you are not I Ali but I can see where your words are coming from and you know, as I do, tomorrow will be better as each day is.
Andy
June 21st, 2021 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Ignorant fool you are not I Ali but I can see where your words are coming from and you know, as I do, tomorrow will be better as each day is.
Andy
June 21st, 2021 00:00
The Ignorant Mind
Doggerel Dave said:
You do write attractively of the life of an \'ignorant fool\'.
Now I don\'t for one moment believe that\'s you, but found it the kind of idea that would tickle my imagination in the same way I might fantasize about being an invisible man........... Or are you making a bigger statement about most people?
Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2021 19:49
Doggerel Dave said:
You do write attractively of the life of an \'ignorant fool\'.
Now I don\'t for one moment believe that\'s you, but found it the kind of idea that would tickle my imagination in the same way I might fantasize about being an invisible man........... Or are you making a bigger statement about most people?
Enjoyed.
June 20th, 2021 19:49
O dear passenger!
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and photograph I Ali. Being at one with nature is so wonderful, I am with it much of the time of my life and am always humbled by its beauty.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words and photograph I Ali. Being at one with nature is so wonderful, I am with it much of the time of my life and am always humbled by its beauty.
Andy
June 20th, 2021 00:06
O dear passenger!
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful a write. Your imagery is fantastic I Ali. Awesome photograph. Great job. ; )
June 19th, 2021 07:02
Accidental Poet said:
So beautiful a write. Your imagery is fantastic I Ali. Awesome photograph. Great job. ; )
June 19th, 2021 07:02
O dear passenger!
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this poem, Ali. I liked the metaphor of myself (and presumably the rest of humankind) as passenger on this earth and it\'s Nature.
The trouble is that after the way humans have treated this nature, we are in for what, for some, will still be a big surprise!
June 19th, 2021 05:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for this poem, Ali. I liked the metaphor of myself (and presumably the rest of humankind) as passenger on this earth and it\'s Nature.
The trouble is that after the way humans have treated this nature, we are in for what, for some, will still be a big surprise!
June 19th, 2021 05:08
The Bed Under the Ground
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words I Ali, you have a long life before you and in that life you will have many memories so that when that time of peace comes to you you will be able to relax within yourself.
Welcome to MPS.
June 19th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good words I Ali, you have a long life before you and in that life you will have many memories so that when that time of peace comes to you you will be able to relax within yourself.
Welcome to MPS.
June 19th, 2021 01:09
The Bed Under the Ground
Accidental Poet said:
Welcome I Ali. Great first write. ; )
June 18th, 2021 12:54
Accidental Poet said:
Welcome I Ali. Great first write. ; )
June 18th, 2021 12:54
The Bed Under the Ground
Saxon Crow said:
Welcime to mps. What a first poem. Faved
Brilliant
June 18th, 2021 11:42
Saxon Crow said:
Welcime to mps. What a first poem. Faved
Brilliant
June 18th, 2021 11:42
The Bed Under the Ground
dusk arising said:
An amazing piece of writing about peace after death.
Welcome to MPS. Please join in with us who comment upon each others poetry on here.
Your post today is quite remarkable and i shall add it to my collection of favourites.
June 18th, 2021 10:34
dusk arising said:
An amazing piece of writing about peace after death.
Welcome to MPS. Please join in with us who comment upon each others poetry on here.
Your post today is quite remarkable and i shall add it to my collection of favourites.
June 18th, 2021 10:34
The Bed Under the Ground
Laura🌻 said:
Ali,
Welcome to MPS.
A very interesting poem. As I read it, the following thoughts filled my mind…
•One day we’ll all have to leave this earth.
•Your flesh will ‘blend in with the nature”, but
•Your soul will fly.
A good write.
Laura🌻
June 18th, 2021 10:34
Laura🌻 said:
Ali,
Welcome to MPS.
A very interesting poem. As I read it, the following thoughts filled my mind…
•One day we’ll all have to leave this earth.
•Your flesh will ‘blend in with the nature”, but
•Your soul will fly.
A good write.
Laura🌻
June 18th, 2021 10:34
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