Comments received on poems by iAli
Myself!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nice writing ) it’s important to be friends with yourself
October 28th, 2021 01:28
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
A nice writing ) it’s important to be friends with yourself
October 28th, 2021 01:28
Myself!
dusk arising said:
Great poetry with super form and conclusion.
Alone one has oneself. A great place to be and learn from the past... wisdom arrives slowly.
October 27th, 2021 11:09
dusk arising said:
Great poetry with super form and conclusion.
Alone one has oneself. A great place to be and learn from the past... wisdom arrives slowly.
October 27th, 2021 11:09
Myself!
Paul Bell said:
This is like the circle of love for one\'s self, maybe finding yourself.
October 27th, 2021 05:43
Paul Bell said:
This is like the circle of love for one\'s self, maybe finding yourself.
October 27th, 2021 05:43
Myself!
Vamsi Sudha said:
Very deep Poet !! Being with oneself is the best time !!!
October 27th, 2021 01:25
Vamsi Sudha said:
Very deep Poet !! Being with oneself is the best time !!!
October 27th, 2021 01:25
Creation
A.H. Browning said:
I enjoyed this writing very much.
Kindest Regards.
October 26th, 2021 23:40
A.H. Browning said:
I enjoyed this writing very much.
Kindest Regards.
October 26th, 2021 23:40
Creation
iAli said:
🙂🙃
So many thanks dear Marie...for reading and for the kind and heart warming comment. 😊
October 14th, 2021 10:13
iAli said:
🙂🙃
So many thanks dear Marie...for reading and for the kind and heart warming comment. 😊
October 14th, 2021 10:13
Ya Rab
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow urdu is my mother tongue so i can read a zabardast invocation glorification poem . Great to read. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 13th, 2021 09:36
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow urdu is my mother tongue so i can read a zabardast invocation glorification poem . Great to read. Kudos!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
October 13th, 2021 09:36
You
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written poem Ali. I used to be a devout christian but since nobody was there to help my very ill wife, who subsequently passed I have given up christianity and beleie that organised religion is a farce - I feel so much freer in my life.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:41
Goldfinch60 said:
Very well written poem Ali. I used to be a devout christian but since nobody was there to help my very ill wife, who subsequently passed I have given up christianity and beleie that organised religion is a farce - I feel so much freer in my life.
Andy
October 13th, 2021 00:41
To see your smile!
Accidental Poet said:
Look within and see the love you search for everywhere. 😉
October 11th, 2021 19:26
Accidental Poet said:
Look within and see the love you search for everywhere. 😉
October 11th, 2021 19:26
Elder
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about an obviously wonderful brother.
Andy
October 10th, 2021 00:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful words about an obviously wonderful brother.
Andy
October 10th, 2021 00:27
I am just what I am!
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all individuals and go our own ways, so all is well Ali.
Andy
October 9th, 2021 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
We are all individuals and go our own ways, so all is well Ali.
Andy
October 9th, 2021 00:33
Just more a while!
L. B. Mek said:
needs a little rewording, to smoothen the delivery, but your hopeful message is faultless!
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
\'What, are you thinking?
Why are you, shrinking?
The darkness around you
is hiding the brightness, beyond
and, All your pain
can be healed from inside - out,
Your journey will morph
into a cause for celebration,
for all those around you\'
(forgive my rudeness,
I just wanted to offer you a feeble sample
an example, of how your wording can become a little smoother or easier to understand)
October 7th, 2021 04:57
L. B. Mek said:
needs a little rewording, to smoothen the delivery, but your hopeful message is faultless!
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
\'What, are you thinking?
Why are you, shrinking?
The darkness around you
is hiding the brightness, beyond
and, All your pain
can be healed from inside - out,
Your journey will morph
into a cause for celebration,
for all those around you\'
(forgive my rudeness,
I just wanted to offer you a feeble sample
an example, of how your wording can become a little smoother or easier to understand)
October 7th, 2021 04:57
Ammi
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication!
clever way to bridge two languages and exemplify the commonality in our collective humanity,
thanks for sharing
October 7th, 2021 02:52
L. B. Mek said:
a wonderful dedication!
clever way to bridge two languages and exemplify the commonality in our collective humanity,
thanks for sharing
October 7th, 2021 02:52
Just more a while!
Goldfinch60 said:
Patience is a virtue that we all need to have.
Andy
October 7th, 2021 00:53
Goldfinch60 said:
Patience is a virtue that we all need to have.
Andy
October 7th, 2021 00:53
You are Beautiful!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Well expressed ...
September 28th, 2021 01:41
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
Well expressed ...
September 28th, 2021 01:41
You are Beautiful!
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I completely agree ! Lovely writing 🙂
September 28th, 2021 01:40
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I completely agree ! Lovely writing 🙂
September 28th, 2021 01:40
O My Hopeful Soul!
rozanne said:
Love this poem❤it speaks volumes of comfort to my soul within this difficult times of pandemic.thank u
September 27th, 2021 13:15
rozanne said:
Love this poem❤it speaks volumes of comfort to my soul within this difficult times of pandemic.thank u
September 27th, 2021 13:15
O My Hopeful Soul!
iAli said:
So many thanks dear poet. I am so glad that you have responded in that way. Your comment make me more hopeful to write more and more. I have started writing after the lockdown of covid pandemic and started reading literature. I am actually a student of physics and also have a great interest in literature. I am trying to improve myself and seeking guidance who will show me how I should go ahead. You have tried to guide me with your kind and encouraging comment. 😊😄
I am happy as you like the poem.😄
September 21st, 2021 10:26
iAli said:
So many thanks dear poet. I am so glad that you have responded in that way. Your comment make me more hopeful to write more and more. I have started writing after the lockdown of covid pandemic and started reading literature. I am actually a student of physics and also have a great interest in literature. I am trying to improve myself and seeking guidance who will show me how I should go ahead. You have tried to guide me with your kind and encouraging comment. 😊😄
I am happy as you like the poem.😄
September 21st, 2021 10:26
O My Hopeful Soul!
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(in my humble opinion
if you stay clear of the
\'dramatics for effect\' elements, in your style:
like the picture and the
repetitive \'oh my soul\';
what you\'ll find, is that
your words and insight\'s
are enough: on their own!
and that validation
you\'re looking from others
you can actually, \'find from within\'
in crafting a wonderfully distilled work of Poetry)
try to distinguish, between your own voice
and the voice you think people will relate to/ gravitate to
strive to develop you \'own voice.\'
(I think you have a wonderful talent and I love your ambition
and am only writing these words, to try and help you stay on the right path towards finetuning your poetic identity,
I know its hard when everything comes to you so easily, and you are aware of how gifted you are yet, you\'re also evidently still quite young
but try and stay humble, dear poet
aspire to forever remain a student of life, never graduate
for the sweetest part of life is always the journey)
forgive me if my words, annoy you
by no means am I trying to talk-down to you, like I know more than you do,
I\'m merely trying to share what little wisdom I have gleaned of life, nothing more
(thanks for sharing,
such a life-affirmingly rejuvenating read,
dear poet)
September 21st, 2021 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
(in my humble opinion
if you stay clear of the
\'dramatics for effect\' elements, in your style:
like the picture and the
repetitive \'oh my soul\';
what you\'ll find, is that
your words and insight\'s
are enough: on their own!
and that validation
you\'re looking from others
you can actually, \'find from within\'
in crafting a wonderfully distilled work of Poetry)
try to distinguish, between your own voice
and the voice you think people will relate to/ gravitate to
strive to develop you \'own voice.\'
(I think you have a wonderful talent and I love your ambition
and am only writing these words, to try and help you stay on the right path towards finetuning your poetic identity,
I know its hard when everything comes to you so easily, and you are aware of how gifted you are yet, you\'re also evidently still quite young
but try and stay humble, dear poet
aspire to forever remain a student of life, never graduate
for the sweetest part of life is always the journey)
forgive me if my words, annoy you
by no means am I trying to talk-down to you, like I know more than you do,
I\'m merely trying to share what little wisdom I have gleaned of life, nothing more
(thanks for sharing,
such a life-affirmingly rejuvenating read,
dear poet)
September 21st, 2021 03:21
O My Hopeful Soul!
dusk arising said:
These words become so meaningful when an older person like me thinks of the life ahead for their grandchildren. I would dearly like to give these words to my grandchildren for them to learn the worth and wisdom they contain as they grow in years, awareness and consciousness.
Quite an amazing piece you have written here and i\'m honoured to place it among my favourites.
September 21st, 2021 03:20
dusk arising said:
These words become so meaningful when an older person like me thinks of the life ahead for their grandchildren. I would dearly like to give these words to my grandchildren for them to learn the worth and wisdom they contain as they grow in years, awareness and consciousness.
Quite an amazing piece you have written here and i\'m honoured to place it among my favourites.
September 21st, 2021 03:20
You are Beautiful!
dusk arising said:
Lovely meaningful words. How sad it is that there are so many among us who your words will be wasted upon though. Some can only see surface, indeed don\'t wish to percieve any further.
I think you well describe some of what makes us become the poets we are.
September 19th, 2021 00:53
dusk arising said:
Lovely meaningful words. How sad it is that there are so many among us who your words will be wasted upon though. Some can only see surface, indeed don\'t wish to percieve any further.
I think you well describe some of what makes us become the poets we are.
September 19th, 2021 00:53
If You Ask Me!
L. B. Mek said:
a good read
some insightful observations, thanks for sharing..
but love is not \'a cure\' of pain,
that\'s just idolised wishful thinking..
love is merely that, love
if it could cure pain
we wouldn\'t have needed mold to \'penicillin\' our fight for survival
or Psychiatrist\'s, as \'heart\' surgeons!
love is too, Real:
to be glamourized as some fantastical otherworldly notion or supposition theory...
a poetic St, once - said it best
\'Love is not, All\':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-19250 )
September 9th, 2021 04:19
L. B. Mek said:
a good read
some insightful observations, thanks for sharing..
but love is not \'a cure\' of pain,
that\'s just idolised wishful thinking..
love is merely that, love
if it could cure pain
we wouldn\'t have needed mold to \'penicillin\' our fight for survival
or Psychiatrist\'s, as \'heart\' surgeons!
love is too, Real:
to be glamourized as some fantastical otherworldly notion or supposition theory...
a poetic St, once - said it best
\'Love is not, All\':
( https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-19250 )
September 9th, 2021 04:19
If You Ask Me!
Accidental Poet said:
My answers would all be the same as you have in your poem. Excellent hope. 👍
September 8th, 2021 19:39
Accidental Poet said:
My answers would all be the same as you have in your poem. Excellent hope. 👍
September 8th, 2021 19:39
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