Comments received on poems by Thomas Koron
Unforgiving Winter
L. B. Mek said:
it somehow feels refreshing to read these words
in the peak of summer, funny
how quickly our bane\'s of existence, can flip
into our yearned-for, escape of relief
in but a shadow\'s width of a passing clouds, breeze...
a wonderful and timely read, thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2021 04:53
L. B. Mek said:
it somehow feels refreshing to read these words
in the peak of summer, funny
how quickly our bane\'s of existence, can flip
into our yearned-for, escape of relief
in but a shadow\'s width of a passing clouds, breeze...
a wonderful and timely read, thanks for sharing
July 27th, 2021 04:53
Shadows in the Moonlight
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting snippet of werewolf lore
a captivating read, thanks for sharing
July 22nd, 2021 03:27
L. B. Mek said:
an interesting snippet of werewolf lore
a captivating read, thanks for sharing
July 22nd, 2021 03:27
Snapdragon
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, seamless iambic flow
and creativity in metaphor,
a memorable read, thanks for sharing:
\'Moving slowly over the grass, I feel
Entranced; the flower holds me in a daze.
Once the snapdragon’s near, I stop and kneel;
And then, dream into the bright summer haze. \'
\'How I had gone for many miles without
The joyful zest, which now flows through my soul.
Shedding away feelings of fear and doubt,
With enchantment that makes my spirit whole.\'
July 19th, 2021 06:02
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery, seamless iambic flow
and creativity in metaphor,
a memorable read, thanks for sharing:
\'Moving slowly over the grass, I feel
Entranced; the flower holds me in a daze.
Once the snapdragon’s near, I stop and kneel;
And then, dream into the bright summer haze. \'
\'How I had gone for many miles without
The joyful zest, which now flows through my soul.
Shedding away feelings of fear and doubt,
With enchantment that makes my spirit whole.\'
July 19th, 2021 06:02
The Veil of Night
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intense in poetic tone
where repetition of theme, is pertinently utilised
to exhaust a subject\'s varyingly angles of perspective
and depth,
with your effortless couplet flow, insures
we readers stay engaged throughout, this worded journey
of enlightening insight\'s, wrapped
in that mystique: of poetic delight!
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
July 19th, 2021 05:54
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully intense in poetic tone
where repetition of theme, is pertinently utilised
to exhaust a subject\'s varyingly angles of perspective
and depth,
with your effortless couplet flow, insures
we readers stay engaged throughout, this worded journey
of enlightening insight\'s, wrapped
in that mystique: of poetic delight!
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
July 19th, 2021 05:54
Sonnet for a Lost Soul
L. B. Mek said:
really like the seemingly effortless, unique - rhyming
thanks for sharing
July 13th, 2021 05:19
L. B. Mek said:
really like the seemingly effortless, unique - rhyming
thanks for sharing
July 13th, 2021 05:19
Our Initial Encounter
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than freezing a love letter like this - a wonderful read Thomas
July 10th, 2021 04:54
Fay Slimm. said:
What could be better than freezing a love letter like this - a wonderful read Thomas
July 10th, 2021 04:54
Behold the Sweet Angel
Caring dove said:
They say when an Angel us around that you can smell the scent of flowers . A lovely poem 🙂
July 10th, 2021 01:01
Caring dove said:
They say when an Angel us around that you can smell the scent of flowers . A lovely poem 🙂
July 10th, 2021 01:01
Our Initial Encounter
Goldfinch60 said:
That love\'s portrait will be forever with you Thomas.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:48
Goldfinch60 said:
That love\'s portrait will be forever with you Thomas.
Andy
July 10th, 2021 00:48
Behold the Sweet Angel
L. B. Mek said:
found this to be such a soothing read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 9th, 2021 03:54
L. B. Mek said:
found this to be such a soothing read
thanks for sharing, dear poet
July 9th, 2021 03:54
Behold the Sweet Angel
Doggerel Dave said:
Should rise through the ranks very rapidly round here., where you may find a whole bunch of poets speculating on angels....
Welcome etc. Feel free to join in any debate that interests you - this keeps MPS a lively place.
July 9th, 2021 01:46
Doggerel Dave said:
Should rise through the ranks very rapidly round here., where you may find a whole bunch of poets speculating on angels....
Welcome etc. Feel free to join in any debate that interests you - this keeps MPS a lively place.
July 9th, 2021 01:46
Behold the Sweet Angel
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be there for us all in this world.
Welcome to MPS.
July 9th, 2021 01:09
Goldfinch60 said:
May that love be there for us all in this world.
Welcome to MPS.
July 9th, 2021 01:09
