Comments received on poems by Ishika



I Bowed To You
fallenAngel1πŸ•Š said:

Wow,are sure your only 14? This is so wonderful🌟 And to think,..like a fine wine,you\'ll only improve with age. Thanks for sharing these lovely words young poetess.πŸŒžβœŒοΈπŸ•Š

November 28th, 2021 14:26

Dagger
spilleronsheet said:

Well crafted words
It felt sad to reading the emotional lines

November 10th, 2021 20:33

Scarr\'d All Over Onto You
spilleronsheet said:

Have a fresh start
That’s a wonderful message

October 22nd, 2021 16:30

Scarr\'d All Over Onto You
Paul Bell said:

I like to think we restart again, not sure as what, maybe a better version of ourselves.

October 22nd, 2021 11:00

I Hope You Don\'t Lose It
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful, although the wording and levels of description were quite generic, you still imbued a heightened sense of intimacy in the overall feel of your poetry..
a very attractive writing style you\'re developing, although
I\'ll admit the love you\'re depicting, seems to be hovering on that tightrope of the overtly devoted, and somewhat unhealthy..
I too hope, the one you chose knows to cherish the treasures in their lives, for their own sake;
because such selfless devotion, isn\'t easy to find
and almost impossible to glue back together, after the trust has been shattered
(thanks for sharing, a great read)
and please don\'t think I\'m trying to be negative or judge, your love
just
sharing my two cents
looking-on, from my place on the other side of a similar coin


October 21st, 2021 06:37

Peaceful Bed
L. B. Mek said:

\'The dirt you were covered with,
Messed up my explanation,

I slept with a smile,
In your heavenly created nation,

My last breathe,
My last sleep,
I ensured it was beside you,

Where my death bed should be,
I found my peace in you.\'
if we\'re one of the lucky, few
who are gifted \'that one\', in their lives
there\'s little worth, in fighting that thread of magnetic fate;
although, our endings may differ
the inevitability of our thoughts, surrendering willingly to wherever we keep \'them\' locked away, in our minds
is a stark - part, of our reality
we just have to accept...
(I doubt anyone who\'s fallen
completely \'disturbingly\' in love, at any point in their lives
can fail to relate with the sincerity and angst imbued in your beautifully worded poem)
thank you! for choosing to share

October 21st, 2021 04:40

Peaceful Bed
The BlackShakespeare said:

Nicely written.

October 20th, 2021 16:25

Peaceful Bed
Paul Bell said:

This could be a great epitaph, the depth running through it is stark.
An end where peace resides.

October 20th, 2021 16:03

Denial
L. B. Mek said:

\'Denial is what has the power,
And the easier shortcut way,
Why is it easier?
Or some more questions you once asked,
In these multiple of sums,
But now i know that you tasked,
Through the endless rows,
In the series of acceptance,
You only ignored,
But now you know its importance,
In this hardness of rock,\'
a great write! thanks for sharing

October 19th, 2021 04:46

Waves
L. B. Mek said:

while I get the lack of clarity is on purpose
and a portrayal of the overwhelming sensation, being expressed in your poetic voice;
I think, this is a little too clustered there are a lot of differing ideas and themes, being squeezed together
it might be, you actually have the makings of two or three different write\'s here..
anyway, I personally found this an intriguing read
thanks for sharing, I really liked these lines:
\'There was no switch to restart,
All the worsts at some times,
Awoke the bad intentions,
My fainted conscience died,
Still my body can\'t form its mentions,
Inside the lake those blurred pearls,
And the floating dark cottons above,
The dark night around me,\'

October 7th, 2021 03:44

My Dear Poetic Heart
Having hope said:

πŸ™‚

October 5th, 2021 13:23

The Drop\'s Love
Having hope said:

Nicely written πŸ‘Œ

October 5th, 2021 13:21

My Dear Poetic Heart
yellowrose said:

Your words are beautiful ) a lovely read

October 5th, 2021 07:10

My Dear Poetic Heart
yellowrose said:

So much sadness yet there is such beauty in your words πŸ™‚

October 5th, 2021 07:09

The Drop\'s Love
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful!
a rain drops, stream of consciousness..
thanks for sharing, a great read

October 1st, 2021 03:50

Sneaky Footsteps
L. B. Mek said:

an intriguing read, some unique word choices and although I couldn\'t understand completely, there\'s a gentle element to your flow, that makes me feel like I\'m reading a very personal write,
thanks for sharing

September 30th, 2021 03:18

Disguised
L. B. Mek said:

you poignantly worded that bleak hopelessness we sometimes have to face and fight, just to survive..
thanks for sharing
(btw you know we can see your poetry, right?) lol
I like your pen name

September 28th, 2021 05:22

Beauty In Eyes
Trenz Pruca said:

Thank you. A beautiful and poignant poem.

September 27th, 2021 17:50

Poetry
Thekkinkkattil said:

A good write

September 27th, 2021 01:12

The Lost Merriness
Jayasree said:

That\'s beautiful writing Ishika. :)

August 15th, 2021 08:04

Me And Only Me
Goldfinch60 said:

It is so important to be at one with yourself, good words Ishika

July 28th, 2021 03:32

The Lost Merriness
yellowrose said:

Lovely and engaging writing πŸ™‚ the moon found its joy

July 26th, 2021 04:33

Remember Me?
Thekkinkkattil said:

Remembrance is sometimes a one way traffic nicely penned

July 23rd, 2021 23:49