Comments received on poems by Ishika Gautam
Loned Damsel
spilleronsheet said:
And this is so beautiful…tears eloped with grief created a beautiful imagery…hope the damsel rises above her grief…
April 26th, 2022 00:06
spilleronsheet said:
And this is so beautiful…tears eloped with grief created a beautiful imagery…hope the damsel rises above her grief…
April 26th, 2022 00:06
Pride
L. B. Mek said:
\'Others what seen a free of soul,
He was a middled with loads as goals,
A dead of dark spent on silent yells,
He had those agony under his eyes dwelled.\'
hopefully with every passing, \'June\'
such experiences
will reduce, be it by single digits
at a time
or six zero\'s.. what important
is \'We\', collectively
empower that message
where being different, isn\'t some sin
or mistake..
its just nature, it\'s
natural
and no one should feel, marginalised
for being themselves, however disparate..
there is genuine beauty, in humanity\'s
diversity!
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
April 12th, 2022 05:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'Others what seen a free of soul,
He was a middled with loads as goals,
A dead of dark spent on silent yells,
He had those agony under his eyes dwelled.\'
hopefully with every passing, \'June\'
such experiences
will reduce, be it by single digits
at a time
or six zero\'s.. what important
is \'We\', collectively
empower that message
where being different, isn\'t some sin
or mistake..
its just nature, it\'s
natural
and no one should feel, marginalised
for being themselves, however disparate..
there is genuine beauty, in humanity\'s
diversity!
(a great write, thanks for sharing)
April 12th, 2022 05:55
Above The Clouds
sophin said:
stunning words, dear poet. they fill me with a sort of reflective reverence; indeed, there are things out of our reach that we will never know. \'only if he never left me curious\' - what a powerful, yet wistful line
March 19th, 2022 20:11
sophin said:
stunning words, dear poet. they fill me with a sort of reflective reverence; indeed, there are things out of our reach that we will never know. \'only if he never left me curious\' - what a powerful, yet wistful line
March 19th, 2022 20:11
Note
Rocky Lagou said:
The teary pillow line was so relatable! I honestly felt the emotion in this piece and your message is intense and vivid. Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:18
Rocky Lagou said:
The teary pillow line was so relatable! I honestly felt the emotion in this piece and your message is intense and vivid. Well done! 💖
March 3rd, 2022 10:18
Note
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a nightmare-o-so-vast.
A note to me to dry up my pillows,
To leave the nights as merry as it goes,
To pass the failures and high up all the lows,
Proving the world wrong whenever my soul glows.\'
love your defiant tone
another wonderful showcasing of the utility
in purposed introspection..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 3rd, 2022 06:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'I live in a nightmare-o-so-vast.
A note to me to dry up my pillows,
To leave the nights as merry as it goes,
To pass the failures and high up all the lows,
Proving the world wrong whenever my soul glows.\'
love your defiant tone
another wonderful showcasing of the utility
in purposed introspection..
thanks for sharing, dear poet
March 3rd, 2022 06:31
Bargains
L. B. Mek said:
(that \'Third Wheel\' existence
in your own lives narrative...
why do we do it to ourselves?!)
really well written, thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:02
L. B. Mek said:
(that \'Third Wheel\' existence
in your own lives narrative...
why do we do it to ourselves?!)
really well written, thanks for sharing
February 21st, 2022 07:02
Bargains
spilleronsheet said:
A melancholy spread
A sadness engulfed
Very emotive write dear poet
February 18th, 2022 14:17
spilleronsheet said:
A melancholy spread
A sadness engulfed
Very emotive write dear poet
February 18th, 2022 14:17
Bargains
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I\'m sensing infidelity and this is not okay. Love should be reciprocal. Show your worth! Lovely poem! 💖✨
February 18th, 2022 11:13
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I\'m sensing infidelity and this is not okay. Love should be reciprocal. Show your worth! Lovely poem! 💖✨
February 18th, 2022 11:13
A Girl Child
spilleronsheet said:
A very empowering read
Sad it is modernity at its high
Yet a mere dignity is too expensive to afford
A sad but true tale you recite
About the numerous hidden lives
February 15th, 2022 00:53
spilleronsheet said:
A very empowering read
Sad it is modernity at its high
Yet a mere dignity is too expensive to afford
A sad but true tale you recite
About the numerous hidden lives
February 15th, 2022 00:53
A Girl Child
Rocky Lagou said:
Was this a women\'s rights anthem, because if so I\'m totally here for it. This was beautiful! Kudos to you! 💖👏
February 14th, 2022 14:17
Rocky Lagou said:
Was this a women\'s rights anthem, because if so I\'m totally here for it. This was beautiful! Kudos to you! 💖👏
February 14th, 2022 14:17
I Know What Love Is..
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Love hath reasons that love itself knows nothing about.\"-Pascal. Sounds to me like love doesn\'t even know what love is. Lol🤗🌹🕊 Nicley penned,and very original style.
January 29th, 2022 21:10
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
\"Love hath reasons that love itself knows nothing about.\"-Pascal. Sounds to me like love doesn\'t even know what love is. Lol🤗🌹🕊 Nicley penned,and very original style.
January 29th, 2022 21:10
I Know What Love Is..
spilleronsheet said:
Love
So hard to speak
Makes people insane
A thorn one shouldn’t pick
But it may bloom
Well penned dear poet…
January 29th, 2022 12:12
spilleronsheet said:
Love
So hard to speak
Makes people insane
A thorn one shouldn’t pick
But it may bloom
Well penned dear poet…
January 29th, 2022 12:12
Lousy Street
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Absolutely beautiful Ishika🌟🌟🌟 Take a bow and shine bright🌞🌹😎
January 23rd, 2022 21:34
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Absolutely beautiful Ishika🌟🌟🌟 Take a bow and shine bright🌞🌹😎
January 23rd, 2022 21:34
Lousy Street
Crystal Hope said:
Fantastic rhyme and emotional storytelling. Amazing read
January 23rd, 2022 17:19
Crystal Hope said:
Fantastic rhyme and emotional storytelling. Amazing read
January 23rd, 2022 17:19
Middle Of The Night
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Absolutely beautifully penned. You write wise beyond your years. Bravo! Take a bow,it\'s your time to not just shine,but to shine so bright🌟and so you shall🌟✌️🌹
January 15th, 2022 19:29
FallenAngel1🕊 said:
Absolutely beautifully penned. You write wise beyond your years. Bravo! Take a bow,it\'s your time to not just shine,but to shine so bright🌟and so you shall🌟✌️🌹
January 15th, 2022 19:29
The Book From The Corner
spilleronsheet said:
It’s very sad
Yet so poetic
Like the last book in stall
I, who stand at corner wish to be interpreted once in life
Great writing dear poet
December 24th, 2021 11:55
spilleronsheet said:
It’s very sad
Yet so poetic
Like the last book in stall
I, who stand at corner wish to be interpreted once in life
Great writing dear poet
December 24th, 2021 11:55
Dagger
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted words
It felt sad to reading the emotional lines
November 10th, 2021 20:33
spilleronsheet said:
Well crafted words
It felt sad to reading the emotional lines
November 10th, 2021 20:33
Scarr\'d All Over Onto You
spilleronsheet said:
Have a fresh start
That’s a wonderful message
October 22nd, 2021 16:30
spilleronsheet said:
Have a fresh start
That’s a wonderful message
October 22nd, 2021 16:30
Scarr\'d All Over Onto You
Paul Bell said:
I like to think we restart again, not sure as what, maybe a better version of ourselves.
October 22nd, 2021 11:00
Paul Bell said:
I like to think we restart again, not sure as what, maybe a better version of ourselves.
October 22nd, 2021 11:00
I Hope You Don\'t Lose It
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, although the wording and levels of description were quite generic, you still imbued a heightened sense of intimacy in the overall feel of your poetry..
a very attractive writing style you\'re developing, although
I\'ll admit the love you\'re depicting, seems to be hovering on that tightrope of the overtly devoted, and somewhat unhealthy..
I too hope, the one you chose knows to cherish the treasures in their lives, for their own sake;
because such selfless devotion, isn\'t easy to find
and almost impossible to glue back together, after the trust has been shattered
(thanks for sharing, a great read)
and please don\'t think I\'m trying to be negative or judge, your love
just
sharing my two cents
looking-on, from my place on the other side of a similar coin
October 21st, 2021 06:37
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful, although the wording and levels of description were quite generic, you still imbued a heightened sense of intimacy in the overall feel of your poetry..
a very attractive writing style you\'re developing, although
I\'ll admit the love you\'re depicting, seems to be hovering on that tightrope of the overtly devoted, and somewhat unhealthy..
I too hope, the one you chose knows to cherish the treasures in their lives, for their own sake;
because such selfless devotion, isn\'t easy to find
and almost impossible to glue back together, after the trust has been shattered
(thanks for sharing, a great read)
and please don\'t think I\'m trying to be negative or judge, your love
just
sharing my two cents
looking-on, from my place on the other side of a similar coin
October 21st, 2021 06:37
Peaceful Bed
L. B. Mek said:
\'The dirt you were covered with,
Messed up my explanation,
I slept with a smile,
In your heavenly created nation,
My last breathe,
My last sleep,
I ensured it was beside you,
Where my death bed should be,
I found my peace in you.\'
if we\'re one of the lucky, few
who are gifted \'that one\', in their lives
there\'s little worth, in fighting that thread of magnetic fate;
although, our endings may differ
the inevitability of our thoughts, surrendering willingly to wherever we keep \'them\' locked away, in our minds
is a stark - part, of our reality
we just have to accept...
(I doubt anyone who\'s fallen
completely \'disturbingly\' in love, at any point in their lives
can fail to relate with the sincerity and angst imbued in your beautifully worded poem)
thank you! for choosing to share
October 21st, 2021 04:40
L. B. Mek said:
\'The dirt you were covered with,
Messed up my explanation,
I slept with a smile,
In your heavenly created nation,
My last breathe,
My last sleep,
I ensured it was beside you,
Where my death bed should be,
I found my peace in you.\'
if we\'re one of the lucky, few
who are gifted \'that one\', in their lives
there\'s little worth, in fighting that thread of magnetic fate;
although, our endings may differ
the inevitability of our thoughts, surrendering willingly to wherever we keep \'them\' locked away, in our minds
is a stark - part, of our reality
we just have to accept...
(I doubt anyone who\'s fallen
completely \'disturbingly\' in love, at any point in their lives
can fail to relate with the sincerity and angst imbued in your beautifully worded poem)
thank you! for choosing to share
October 21st, 2021 04:40
Peaceful Bed
Paul Bell said:
This could be a great epitaph, the depth running through it is stark.
An end where peace resides.
October 20th, 2021 16:03
Paul Bell said:
This could be a great epitaph, the depth running through it is stark.
An end where peace resides.
October 20th, 2021 16:03
Denial
L. B. Mek said:
\'Denial is what has the power,
And the easier shortcut way,
Why is it easier?
Or some more questions you once asked,
In these multiple of sums,
But now i know that you tasked,
Through the endless rows,
In the series of acceptance,
You only ignored,
But now you know its importance,
In this hardness of rock,\'
a great write! thanks for sharing
October 19th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
\'Denial is what has the power,
And the easier shortcut way,
Why is it easier?
Or some more questions you once asked,
In these multiple of sums,
But now i know that you tasked,
Through the endless rows,
In the series of acceptance,
You only ignored,
But now you know its importance,
In this hardness of rock,\'
a great write! thanks for sharing
October 19th, 2021 04:46
Waves
L. B. Mek said:
while I get the lack of clarity is on purpose
and a portrayal of the overwhelming sensation, being expressed in your poetic voice;
I think, this is a little too clustered there are a lot of differing ideas and themes, being squeezed together
it might be, you actually have the makings of two or three different write\'s here..
anyway, I personally found this an intriguing read
thanks for sharing, I really liked these lines:
\'There was no switch to restart,
All the worsts at some times,
Awoke the bad intentions,
My fainted conscience died,
Still my body can\'t form its mentions,
Inside the lake those blurred pearls,
And the floating dark cottons above,
The dark night around me,\'
October 7th, 2021 03:44
L. B. Mek said:
while I get the lack of clarity is on purpose
and a portrayal of the overwhelming sensation, being expressed in your poetic voice;
I think, this is a little too clustered there are a lot of differing ideas and themes, being squeezed together
it might be, you actually have the makings of two or three different write\'s here..
anyway, I personally found this an intriguing read
thanks for sharing, I really liked these lines:
\'There was no switch to restart,
All the worsts at some times,
Awoke the bad intentions,
My fainted conscience died,
Still my body can\'t form its mentions,
Inside the lake those blurred pearls,
And the floating dark cottons above,
The dark night around me,\'
October 7th, 2021 03:44
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