Comments received on poems by Jayy
Broken Mirror
Bragee said:
Each and everyone one of us is our own unique piece of art!
Self love!
March 18th, 2024 23:22
Bragee said:
Each and everyone one of us is our own unique piece of art!
Self love!
March 18th, 2024 23:22
THE NIGHT
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cold feet
People watching
Rehearsing our conversation
What
you’ll say, what i\'ll say
Hoping
i\'ll give you, the chance
Little do you know
I
was just as scared
that night\'..
You\'ve emoted such a turbulent
cornucopia
of electrifyingly, wondrous anticipation
in those moments, before
two strangers - leap
for all the miracle, they ever
longed for in their lives...!
(A great write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and please
forgive my rude reimagining
of your lines, while trying
to showcase
the points that impacted me
the most
I meant no disrespect)
February 3rd, 2022 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
\'Cold feet
People watching
Rehearsing our conversation
What
you’ll say, what i\'ll say
Hoping
i\'ll give you, the chance
Little do you know
I
was just as scared
that night\'..
You\'ve emoted such a turbulent
cornucopia
of electrifyingly, wondrous anticipation
in those moments, before
two strangers - leap
for all the miracle, they ever
longed for in their lives...!
(A great write!
thanks for sharing, dear poet
and please
forgive my rude reimagining
of your lines, while trying
to showcase
the points that impacted me
the most
I meant no disrespect)
February 3rd, 2022 06:24
Butterflies 🦋
Nilanjana said:
To love a person is to see all of their magic and to remind them of it when they have forgotten. Amazing poem!!
December 17th, 2021 01:25
Nilanjana said:
To love a person is to see all of their magic and to remind them of it when they have forgotten. Amazing poem!!
December 17th, 2021 01:25
Butterflies 🦋
Younique said:
This poem symbolizes my feelings towards someone I know. I love it !
December 16th, 2021 22:56
Younique said:
This poem symbolizes my feelings towards someone I know. I love it !
December 16th, 2021 22:56
One Moment
L. B. Mek said:
\'Flowers to complete their day
Buy their favorite snacks
Watch their favorite shows\'
\'All are love languages
Learn to appreciate the little things\'
(loved these lines
wonderfully poetic, and so very true
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:21
L. B. Mek said:
\'Flowers to complete their day
Buy their favorite snacks
Watch their favorite shows\'
\'All are love languages
Learn to appreciate the little things\'
(loved these lines
wonderfully poetic, and so very true
thanks for sharing, dear poet)
December 13th, 2021 04:21
InComplete
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy, how much our experience of life can differ
for example, some people
are overwhelmed by their relationships, and have so many connections and yet,
like you write, have the luxury to question just how \'real\' those connections are;
and then, there are others in the world
who \'learnt\' early and brutally, that whoever may be passing through in their life\'s peripheral view
there is nobody, they can Ever count on
and so, even complaining or questioning isn\'t something that will occur to them,
they simply accept, that plague of loneliness seeped deep into the marrow reality of their bones, as a universal truth to their existence..
and even crazier, you both may be neighbours
smiling your customary hello\'s, as you
\'sliding doors\', pass
that \'other\' individual,
who knows only their \'New Hampshire\' blinkered view of the world,
living with the utmost trust in everyone and anyone, naively counting
on \'the goodness\' of others to bail them out, time n again...
(yeah, its a crazy world
and that roll of dice, that determines your experience of life
is skewed from the outset;
still, all we can do is travers our path,
as Best we can) lol
please forgive my opinionated and unnecessarily lengthy reply, thank you for inspiring me and for sharing such a thought provoking write,
October 18th, 2021 04:24
L. B. Mek said:
its crazy, how much our experience of life can differ
for example, some people
are overwhelmed by their relationships, and have so many connections and yet,
like you write, have the luxury to question just how \'real\' those connections are;
and then, there are others in the world
who \'learnt\' early and brutally, that whoever may be passing through in their life\'s peripheral view
there is nobody, they can Ever count on
and so, even complaining or questioning isn\'t something that will occur to them,
they simply accept, that plague of loneliness seeped deep into the marrow reality of their bones, as a universal truth to their existence..
and even crazier, you both may be neighbours
smiling your customary hello\'s, as you
\'sliding doors\', pass
that \'other\' individual,
who knows only their \'New Hampshire\' blinkered view of the world,
living with the utmost trust in everyone and anyone, naively counting
on \'the goodness\' of others to bail them out, time n again...
(yeah, its a crazy world
and that roll of dice, that determines your experience of life
is skewed from the outset;
still, all we can do is travers our path,
as Best we can) lol
please forgive my opinionated and unnecessarily lengthy reply, thank you for inspiring me and for sharing such a thought provoking write,
October 18th, 2021 04:24
True Enemies
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I know your words
as if you plucked them from my heart
and I know your unstated fury
as if we once waged a war side-by-side,
but sadly
we\'re two complete strangers, what we have in common
is that we toil, our path in life amongst all the abundant cruelty of societies brazen, hypocrisy...
(thanks for sharing
a write worded, so accessible
that I could relate with, so instinctively)
October 5th, 2021 05:21
L. B. Mek said:
yeah, I know your words
as if you plucked them from my heart
and I know your unstated fury
as if we once waged a war side-by-side,
but sadly
we\'re two complete strangers, what we have in common
is that we toil, our path in life amongst all the abundant cruelty of societies brazen, hypocrisy...
(thanks for sharing
a write worded, so accessible
that I could relate with, so instinctively)
October 5th, 2021 05:21
Tears
L. B. Mek said:
words that reveal just how much care and attention
the poetic voice is investing
in the person that\'s captured their imagination,
thanks for sharing
September 3rd, 2021 04:54
L. B. Mek said:
words that reveal just how much care and attention
the poetic voice is investing
in the person that\'s captured their imagination,
thanks for sharing
September 3rd, 2021 04:54
Tears
rebmasters said:
This is beautiful. A tribute I would want to give to the one I love too
September 3rd, 2021 04:02
rebmasters said:
This is beautiful. A tribute I would want to give to the one I love too
September 3rd, 2021 04:02
Love And Happiness
Accidental Poet said:
Definitely bends the needle of the Loveometer. Great job Jayyy. 😉
July 27th, 2021 15:55
Accidental Poet said:
Definitely bends the needle of the Loveometer. Great job Jayyy. 😉
July 27th, 2021 15:55
Love And Happiness
Doggerel Dave said:
(This will attract some commentary underneath - You\'ll see)
I\'ve looked at your Public Profile, and you have given of yourself there, so I felt you were worth a comment.
\'Love\' poetry is here in abundance; it is a crowded market, so one of two things may happen: You will be lost in the crowd, or love poets from all over will come to your defence - especially as I\'ve dropped in first - I may have made your career here, but .. who knows?
I\'d argue you should diversify...
Welcome to MPS ( traditional greeting here) Feel free to comment back, respond or whatever here and everywhere - Dialogue makes MPS a lively place to be.
July 27th, 2021 01:11
Doggerel Dave said:
(This will attract some commentary underneath - You\'ll see)
I\'ve looked at your Public Profile, and you have given of yourself there, so I felt you were worth a comment.
\'Love\' poetry is here in abundance; it is a crowded market, so one of two things may happen: You will be lost in the crowd, or love poets from all over will come to your defence - especially as I\'ve dropped in first - I may have made your career here, but .. who knows?
I\'d argue you should diversify...
Welcome to MPS ( traditional greeting here) Feel free to comment back, respond or whatever here and everywhere - Dialogue makes MPS a lively place to be.
July 27th, 2021 01:11
